Palpitating The Seductive Sheath~

Is it in the chiffon glaze of my dielectric pumps

the way the blades of glial grass weave helpless dew

against my calves in love’s painful striations

that move you

groove you

to frame my mahogany veil with the largest hands

I’ve ever seen

 

Is it the clouds, that wear my myelin dreams in a mushroom cap

the way they reflect a field of rippling poses

in hip pressure, against the flank of a moving army of ghosts

looking for a tesseract girl

who can leap tall theoretical orders

in a single tetrahedronic dip

toward hyperprismatic

love

 

Or, is it my latex glissande into a simple room

the way simplicity slithers from my wet gaze

how pearl beads in my hairline come alive

at attention

under fingertips in PhD’s , admiring

the weaving

in my celestial antiquity

 

 

 

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Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Or, is it my latex glissande into a simple room

the way simplicity slithers from my wet gaze

how pearl beads in my hairline come alive

at attention

under fingertips in PhD’s , admiring

the weaving

in my celestial antiquity'

unbelievable voice and flow, the images sophisticated and unforgettable, edgy and artistic. this is surrealism at its best with unexpected associations that turn language upside down and inside out. my favourite image: 'the way the blades of glial grass weave helpless dew'.

[Scytheriax]

The diction is both at once powerful and delicate, creating an image of a silken thread with a steel core. The writing is beautiful. I loved this piece; it's well-written and thought out.

[Tommy]

You had me seein' triple x...lol... Playing doctor never sounded so much fun...As always Selene the whimsy in your words create a vivid scene...

Nuclear!!!
RLG,
Tommy

[joshua deathdealer]

This is brilliant and sensual. Full of hidden gems. Thanks for sharing xx

[Allen Smuckler]

This is an absolutely great write, Kitty...and I'll tell you why...though I didn't know what 6 or 7 of the words meant....I understood exactly what you wanted me too.
I'm not sure if that's good or bad....but it says something about your descriptive prowess and the way you paint a picture with your words. It was all crystal clear and I loved it..
now to the Thesaurus....
allen

[kmartell]

you have a great voice in yr poems.

is goot poetry. yah a release of tension while holding the tension

[Lilly Negoi]

read it, re-read it, sipped it slowly, read it out-loud...your language is a true kaleidoscope of wonders. each time i rotate it i find more beauty.

[EMF]

Seriously, lay off the therarus. They've been dead for Millenia. Went the way of the dino. Along with the need to understand the flib flabbery of the progressive thought, while Kylie Minouge whips up the Angel delight and Kelly Brook makes the Jelly. Or did I just lapse into personal Fantasy again. You do bring that out. Every poem a trip along a literary defib and a burn through the frontal lobe with a crystaline thermic lance.
God's bless your dainty little typing fingers

[Robin]

metaphoric wisps of phonetic pherenomes breezing through the hindbrain ~ I love it when you say tesseract ~

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

Loki~ I'd have to put meself down since I'm a walking talking breathing organic thesaurus~ =)~