UnAlice In Wonderland Grows Up And Will Kick You In The Face If You Cross Her~

~A Cautionary Tale For Men Things Contemplating Quickies With Tilty Girls~

Like a small animal

In a splash of morning sun

I will peel you from my skin

With my elemental canines

Grape skin in the veins of my struggle

To unmend you from my quilt

~No one asked you to stay the night, motherf*ck*r~

Like a large soul

With too many holes in the pockets of morning

I will kick the pieces of your dreams

Under my bed

For the Queen Of Clovers

To brew for brunch with Old Badger

~No one asked you to bleed your mind all over my sheets~

Like a unrequited fairy tale

Worn out under a King’s skin in lavender and soot

I will puzzle for hours over the shape of your fragrance

The indent of your bones in my twenty mattress layers

Betting my spirit with old Hoof

That you’ve never met such a version of UnAlice

Who will not only kick you in the face 

But firmly escort you out the morning door

With nothing more to show for your conquest

Than a pop tart

And a bloody soul

~No one asked you to play with my ink, motherf*ck*r~

 

 

copyright:2011vssmd/amusemusepress

ALL GADDAMN RIGHTS RESERVED

Author's Note

title courtesy of Sam OT ~ ;)~

Reviews

[LilyT]

I was just reading the back and forths over at FB and you are one wicked, beautiful bish! LMFAO! Really only someone with a mazey brain like yours could connect the dots between a killer comment and put it on your potter's wheel and make one hell of a kick a*s poem out of it with subtle pushes going on in every damn line!


Betting my spirit with old Hoof

That you’ve never met such a version of UnAlice

Who will not only kick you in the face and out the morning door

With nothing more to show for your conquest

Than a pop tart

And a bloody soul

~No one asked you to play with my ink, motherf*ck*r~


Laughing myself into a pee fit! LOL

[joshua deathdealer]

This is marvelous. I'm basking in this dark piece. Well done. I love poptarts. wildberry xx

[Marie Harrison]

Love your creative take on Alice and Wonderland. Leaving with his collection of a pop tart, bloody soul and something cool to brag about at the water cooler!

[Reese38]

As you can see, Queen Surreal, most of us would willingly stick our head in the jaws of the metaphorical alligator for a night with a sorceress of your make, especially with the possibility of serious damage looming on the horizon. Most of us are built that way. I'n love with the dangerous love.
A playful, evocative, biting presentation splashed on the screen with gleeful, sensual, violent abandon. Dinner? (:

[asdarkeyesclose]

'~No one asked you to bleed your mind all over my sheets~

Like a unrequited fairy tale

Worn out under a King’s skin in lavender and soot

I will puzzle for hours over the shape of your fragrance

The indent of your bones in my twenty mattress layers'

your anger glimmers and glints like a rare jewel, quite beautiful in fact! Stand back for a moment... breathe... Alice is not one to mess with. Hope this idiot is now shivering in the gutter where he belongs! Great set down :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well remind me never to stay the night, not a morning person I see... you do have that wicked appeal that is like a tractor beam.

[SkinlessFrank]

Sometimes you have no choice but to take that fountain pen and plunge it with one swift movement into the base of his spine. The ink will rise up through the veins, make its way in plumes to the heart muscle, causing fibrillation.

[Leo]

peel me baby! I love poptarts!

[writing mojo]

a wicked tale in and out through trails and vales of red fluid, which you swoop to the edge with a blade pulled right from the side of this victim slain
your words in the stain remain..amazing stuff

[Robin]

Ink is dangerous stuff , never to played with and to always be respected , it is known to turn princes into frogs and imprison faire ladies , Used properly it is the deadly enemy of our modern superficial society - the imagination .

this Kitty roars

[d]

somehow i love this invitation!