Lonely Children's Recipe For Myth Adventures~A Beginner's Course In Horse Tales

In onyx

my body sets its jewel

between the setting of the sun

and the moon above the trees

I find the rhythm for the onset of life

in velvet flares of deep breathing

my fingers elongate into ivory ribbons

through the sea of a jet horse

a  voluptuous human lean

in Snow White myth adventures

my milk

dew against a charcoal illustration drinking color

from my eyes in emerald for the pines

indigo from hard muscles in motion

moistening the atoms slipping through the story of us

a girl

and a horse

amalgamated

in the teapot leaves of a lonely child under a mist canopy

drawing the future with slow sips of perennials

and honey

with a side of lemon for a foal

rocking in the corner

of her personal fairy tale

 

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[OT]

"a girl
and a horse
amalgamated
in the teapot leaves of a lonely child under a mist canopy
drawing the future with slow sips of perennials
and honey
with a side of lemon for a foal
rocking in the corner
of her personal fairy tale" - love those lines especially the last two - the rocking in the corner of her personal fairy tale - and the teapot leaves of a lonely child is just inspired - love that image! nice!

[JelliFyshKissUs]

The birth of mythic wings and pixie things. I knew it began somewhere. Funny how most lose touch with that inner child, dreaming up tales along the cracks in the wall. And yet, here you are, with the child glowing in your bones. Such a beautiful thing, Dovely.

[Robin]

against this onyx background , a jewel radiates in cerulean and gold , the dreamscape alive with a touch across a rippled mist , the breath of her steed , her freedom joined in the rhythmic beat of their hearts . to place of personal memories , a private wonderland - poetry

[.]

you tease the words forcing them to interact at a level that they can't comprehend..and make beauitiful dance off the page.

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm seems like the first piece I read of yours was about..a girl

and a horse

amalgamated
and it was set in a desert in Arizona...cant quite remember , at the periphery of My thoughts ..I love this meatphor.."In onyx

my body sets its jewel

between the setting of the sun

and the moon above the trees

I find the rhythm for the onset of life

in velvet flares of deep breathing'

[FireWoman]

A picture inside a picture inside a picture. I have never quoted my favorite lines in any of your work in comment form, as they are naked without each other. Each word blends perfectly into the next broadening the minds picture with each letter.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wonderful mix of childhood fairytales and fantasy in the adult human mind. So much imagery between the lines. Very unique.


~Anna Rose

[Reese38]

a girl

and a horse

amalgamated

in the teapot leaves of a lonely child under a mist canopy

drawing the future with slow sips of perennials

and honey

with a side of lemon for a foal

rocking in the corner

of her personal fairy tale



You write with ink from the richest of spirits.



in velvet flares of deep breathing

my fingers elongate into ivory ribbons

through the sea of a jet horse

a voluptuous human lean



Images in full dimension. You leave me speechless and in wonder with this one.

[SkinlessFrank]

Your words are like smooth Amaro, full of herbs and chocolate. I'd like to know how you have learned to distill this.

[Rikkevi Rue]

so rich with imagery and craftily painted with emotions lace the sentiments pour into (and out of) my mind with delighted alacrity. If words had a flavor yours would be rich as caramel, or the melting marshmallows in hot cocoa, or perhaps some delectable mushroomy aroma, the kind that spin thoughts into their secret special hidden corners or childhoods happier moments. I love the carefree spirit of your work! Benessimo!!!

[Lilly Negoi]

aye :) you indeed are a fairy yourself Selene ;) and you surely look like one :) beautiful selfportrait you have here!