Shake N Bake~
A Poem by
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
My hips knew the beats
before my body caught up
they painted my effigy
played my ethnology
little girl loops on the strings of technology
Calvin’s incline stitched under my spine
hollow and undulate
align my decline
syrup with rabbits
through my white milk
blow through my silk
see, I have this habit
to inhabit
the male thing’s
bibbity
babitty
and boo!
I’m blue, it’s true
if I don’t find my way
in his bones, and through
the glitter
where the w***e knows how to teach a doll
to be a blowthrough stripper
a cabal on a rack with a helluva rack
ratatatta! Ooohed
they ahhhd
they bought the lips
the eyes
the gun, the lies
Jimmi in a pool of blood
Seleny on standby
rabbit headlights in the eyes
the show must go on
yakuza
and crimson
Seleny skips in
naked and bloody
mmmm, memories are yummy
not
shot through with hot
love
my spine a bow
his above
shoved
aside
Saturday, Saturday night live
heads talking
Lenny Bruce
grave stalking
stuttering
chalkin
bodies in an outline
Chaucer’s stains in the gutter
sideswiped
for Charlie, not a word but a song from a model bird
under my back pact
backtrack
they told me to bring home the bacon
and fry it up in a pan
cuz I’m a woman
and that means I can
can can
shop right
buy rite
dazzle me in blind light
shake my maker
reserve my acre
in ‘Merica the lovely hell
that swallowed down my virgin swells
but wasn’t man enough to take
my shake
my bake
my magik oven
cuz . . . .
if you give a cat a cup cake
she’ll surely see the uptake
“S’up Drake?”
and if you give a moose a muffin
he’ll steal Little Trouble Muffet’s
troubles
doubled
in one scoop
and two
where’s the man they promised my true blue
when I was Bionic
woman and Wonder
wondering about ironic
ionic
teacher as my preacher
his hand under my . . . .(shut my mouth about it!)
here, baby baby drink this tonic
magik 12
bullets
double dutch
and fluids
they burned the girl on the roof
Coco broke a tooth, no, no, not a blue tooth
oh sooth my aching brain
with your lullabye
refrains
and I’ll dig you from the ground
with my broken hands
drenched in my dusty wedding gown
Happy Birthday to me
now
cakes and death
the age
becomes
an echo
my surreal bend, art deco
12 candles burning
Seleny on a stage
shake and bake
and burnin’
copyright:2011vssmd/amusemusepress
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© 2011 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
Featured Review
Holy f****n' hell! I want to see you read this. I want to see ever single word ripen inside your mouth and burst between your teeth as you spit out the center seeds. You're amazing. Combining rhythm, pieces of old commercials, old loves (you're never going to let Jimmi go, are you?") 21st century rappers, nursery rhymes, and f**k if you didn't even twist up If you Give A Cat A Cupcake (when your grandson gets old enough to read your poems I want o see his face when he reads thi, lol) and still make it fresh and own it! You're the poetic ripper of this century.
see, I have this habit
to inhabit
the male thing’s
bibbity
babitty
and boo!
I’m blue, it’s true
if I don’t find my way
in his bones, and through
the glitter
where the w***e knows how to teach a doll
to be a blowthrough stripper
a cabal on a rack with a helluva rack
ratatatta! Ooohed
they ahhhd
they bought the lips
the eyes
the gun, the lies
Jimmi in a pool of blood
Seleny on standby
rabbit headlights in the eyes
the show must go on
yakuza
and crimson
Posted 13 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
Love it!
everyword
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love it!
everyword
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
who needs photo albums ... or cook books
you have lit the surrealscape with real
and oh how you so know the beat Selene * mindtrippin' hipdips with a quick tip and a smile *
Posted 13 Years Ago
who needs photo albums ... or cook books
you have lit the surrealscape with real
and oh how you so know the beat Selene * mindtrippin' hipdips with a quick tip and a smile *
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This piece rocks like liquid lightning ....your words burning up the page with a fiery doo-0p-beat rhythm all their own....Great PeN!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This piece rocks like liquid lightning ....your words burning up the page with a fiery doo-0p-beat rhythm all their own....Great PeN!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
At 12 we were women, our eyes had seen things no child should. Our bodies treated like a trashed rag doll, thrown to the side never to reveal only to conceal. You cling to an older man and learn love only to have that taken so savagely... That age is the time when girls still do read books like you describe, play with their Easy Bake and are between the child & grown up feelings.
My muse has been tugging on me about this exact subject. M turned 12 on Sunday & she had a slumber party & went to Chuck E. Cheese then spent the rest of the night giggling w/ her friends. I, was never allowed that childhood. I mourn for the little girl I never got to be and boil with rage remembering the backdrop that turned me into a woman far too soon.
Your quick cuts here work a sharp edge of a life that should have been so very different.
Posted 13 Years Ago
At 12 we were women, our eyes had seen things no child should. Our bodies treated like a trashed rag doll, thrown to the side never to reveal only to conceal. You cling to an older man and learn love only to have that taken so savagely... That age is the time when girls still do read books like you describe, play with their Easy Bake and are between the child & grown up feelings.
My muse has been tugging on me about this exact subject. M turned 12 on Sunday & she had a slumber party & went to Chuck E. Cheese then spent the rest of the night giggling w/ her friends. I, was never allowed that childhood. I mourn for the little girl I never got to be and boil with rage remembering the backdrop that turned me into a woman far too soon.
Your quick cuts here work a sharp edge of a life that should have been so very different.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice rythm and I loved little pieces of commericals and ads throughout the piece. It fit nicely and didn't take anything way. This is truly an intriguing masterpiece. Wonderfully penned.
Great write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice rythm and I loved little pieces of commericals and ads throughout the piece. It fit nicely and didn't take anything way. This is truly an intriguing masterpiece. Wonderfully penned.
Great write!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You're a volcanic talent. Your lava erupts in the most extraordinary patterns. You're the queen of spectacular rhythmic subtleties.
if you give a cat a cup cake
she’ll surely see the uptake
“S’up Drake?”
and if you give a moose a muffin
he’ll steal Little Trouble Muffet’s
troubles
doubled
in one scoop
and two
where’s the man they promised my true blue
when I was Bionic
woman and Wonder
wondering about ironic
Posted 13 Years Ago
You're a volcanic talent. Your lava erupts in the most extraordinary patterns. You're the queen of spectacular rhythmic subtleties.
if you give a cat a cup cake
she’ll surely see the uptake
“S’up Drake?”
and if you give a moose a muffin
he’ll steal Little Trouble Muffet’s
troubles
doubled
in one scoop
and two
where’s the man they promised my true blue
when I was Bionic
woman and Wonder
wondering about ironic
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is how you put beat and rhythm into a poem! The quick pace bringing down through control, fear, strength, pride and matter of fact assassins seducing the weak parading as leaders.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is how you put beat and rhythm into a poem! The quick pace bringing down through control, fear, strength, pride and matter of fact assassins seducing the weak parading as leaders.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow. My mind is blinded. Seared. Just as I feared. Not that I minded.
Wow. Just wow. There is (as in all of your works) obviously a lot of personal stuff here that I don't know about but the power rips through.
Did I say wow?
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow. My mind is blinded. Seared. Just as I feared. Not that I minded.
Wow. Just wow. There is (as in all of your works) obviously a lot of personal stuff here that I don't know about but the power rips through.
Did I say wow?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this is old school selene, loved every hip hoppin moment of it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is old school selene, loved every hip hoppin moment of it!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
We want to see you read this too! You sure do know how to wake us up and keep us wide eyed for days. That's it! You're poetic cocaine! We love you, you make the world a more interesting place, and you make words into something completely new!
You brought back the 70's in your own Selene way with these lines.
Saturday, Saturday night live
heads talking
Lenny Bruce
grave stalking
stuttering
chalkin
bodies in an outline
Chaucer’s stains in the gutter
sideswiped
for Charlie, not a word but a song from a model bird
under my back pact
backtrack
they told me to bring home the bacon
and fry it up in a pan
cuz I’m a woman
and that means I can
can can
Brilliant you!!!!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
We want to see you read this too! You sure do know how to wake us up and keep us wide eyed for days. That's it! You're poetic cocaine! We love you, you make the world a more interesting place, and you make words into something completely new!
You brought back the 70's in your own Selene way with these lines.
Saturday, Saturday night live
heads talking
Lenny Bruce
grave stalking
stuttering
chalkin
bodies in an outline
Chaucer’s stains in the gutter
sideswiped
for Charlie, not a word but a song from a model bird
under my back pact
backtrack
they told me to bring home the bacon
and fry it up in a pan
cuz I’m a woman
and that means I can
can can
Brilliant you!!!!!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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