duperie d'individu= self deceit
miroir de main=hand mirror
go see= the insane rush of model things through the streets to get to their appointments on time in hopes of being booked for a shoot~
My Review
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Culled from the imagery of style, in the dualities of dualities, from every word a multitude of meanings. Dainty alone deflowered so many layers of a woman, from child to softness to refined to elegance to grace, etc. I've read it aloud, in my head, in a whisper, and each time a visual display within my mind created a new, touching upon an abundance of soul states. Your staples of myth foundations are the music that plays eternally in the back drop of your every poetic line, and here laces the patterns together with invisible stitches. One woman, a million layers, self perceived, self deceived, culturally culled, civility sculpted, politically molded, patriarchal manipulation, karmic exploration. does she do it because she's taught to? does she do it because she wants to? is she who she is? who she wants to be? who they say she should be? Giving what is needed? Giving what is asked for? Giving what's expected of her? Giving before it can be taken? Giving to be rid of the weight of it all? Does she even show herself the image of her true face? so many questions, so many feelings, stirred here between black onyx meeting white light, and the answers lie forever in the shades of gray the melding of your words bare...
Only you~ and I mean those two words in the deepest of all human elements~ can decipher woman, as if the very blood within the vein that knows the intimacy of such life.
I've said it before, and I will always say it, you should be required reading for every young female that breathes~
As I am finding my mind intrigued by your review of my piece "Their Own Line", I can't help but share how refreshing it is to read your words which takes me away from the plain and stubborn. This piece is very graphically detail and arranged perfectly. I loved the painting reference especially because I am also an artist. I was picturing as I was reading, a woman creating an impressionistic masterpiece. ONE WORD - AWESOME!
As always a treasure to read Selene, immediately I fell below the distractive layers adorning the suface coated in a mosaic of confusion and subterfuge, well below laid the true soul of this write....... seeing beyond the reflection
Incredible poem. This reminds me of Adrienne Rich's works. I wish I could write something so profound, it makes me contemplate the masks people have- the faces we don't show others, our secrets and the beauty in the ugliness.
what i adore and envy so much in your work are all the unexpectedly perfect marriages of phrase and imagery.
case in point:
'the promise of a demitasse filled
with bold days;
her paintbrush is made of rib bones
and horsehair'
to linger here a minute for a close reading- the bold days ... yet only enough to fill a demitasse... so telling.
and the tools of her art cost some being(s) its (their) life(lives)... and the raw, 'ill-kill-for-it-and-cobble-together-what-i-need-out-of-the-broken-pieces-around-me spirit that image conveys...