The Lonely Poem~

~patterns~

Above the paper

hovering

a thousand curves and lines;

the poet

takes a  bullet in metaphors

her ink

splatters

drips down a picture frame

a coroner’s Rorschach

 

Above the paper

hovering

an onyx moth

her dusky dust

molting

in candle light

 

The Lonely poem

folds her corners

once

thrice

over

flip

once more

now;

a recycled poem

into

an origami swan

in skye blue

 

 

copyright:2011vssmd/amusemusepress

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

Reviews

[LilyT]

Your sumptuous gossamer poetic striptease takes my breath away. How you intermingle tragedy and sensuality is beyond me, and beyond human, to have this sort of floating affect between the mind and the soul.

a recycled poem



into



an origami swan



in skye blue


Beautiful.

[Kerry O'Connor]

Oh lovely.. the ink becomes words becomes poem becomes origami swan sailing away on the cloudy thoughts of Skye.

[Ed Hart]

and did she fold the feel of fire free
to say again into the skye blue sea
those lone laments sung longingly
while i stand with those ashore
and listen to the wind say evermore

[Ruth]

This is absolutely beautiful! The lonely signature through art.....so sublime! xx

[Robin]

an artist who knows the meaning of meaning , your deft control of contrast and such elegant movement as your poetry pours , flutters and tucks into our own cerebral folds

[Richielee]

nicely done with some interesting ideas woven together till the sumptious ending .

[Aidz]

A skill worthy of the art of origami, penned in the wax of the molten candle... treasured :)