Apples In Our Wicked Blush~

If I cut you

just right

will you touch me through the wound

of your childhood;

you know,

the mandrake

we found under the holly tree

in a fairy tale

ago

is still rooted in your vertebrae

eating the colors

from each chakra

with each year

and I slip my flowers

and strip from my bark

wondering if skin is all you need

pouring white milk from my bones

tracing every bruise in white

finger paints tipped

a soft strike

my lips in mulberry stains

working the mandrake

pulling fairy tales between my cheeks

to pour

to fill my honeycomb soul

with your beautiful pain

your arch into the wild

underlands of sacred sex

text in tattoo

peeling from my palms

henna soil, filling your ribs

and I laugh

“Oh Adam, ain’t this a b***h.”

and he lol’s

texting god

breaking him from the equation

through a text message

 

we laugh

apples in our wicked blush

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[OT]

haha you're mad! I love this one - the descriptions are just brilliant - love - "and strip from my bark
wondering if skin is all you need
pouring white milk from my bones" and "working the mandrake
pulling fairy tales between my cheeks
to pour
to fill my honeycomb soul" - and just all of it really - it's just one big creative piece - images so good - I like!! nice!

[arbitrary jane]

'and I laugh
“Oh Adam, ain’t this a b***h.”
and he lol’s
texting god
breaking him from the equation
through a text message'

... this is the part of the playful sword fight, the one that's all flirtation and tease, where the girl stops fooling around and whips her rapier in such a way that lets him know she could slice him to ribbons.
wickedly fun.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

And what a wicked Eve you are! Adam never stood a chance being made one flesh with you...

[Amy Bumpas]

I really like this line:If I cut you
just right
will you touch me through the wound
of your childhood;
This is nature in its true form...the good, the bad, the ugly...

[FireWoman]

I don't blame the serpent, nor the tree, I blame Adam! ; )

The movement through the years & chakras blended with a "honeycomb soul" is a magical combination of words. Your Raspberry Girl & Honeycomb Soul fit together like the missing piece to a puzzle.

[Morning Star]

Your words kept me going i knew it was about Adam And Eve
The minute i read the word chakra and
mandrake the plant with a forked root resembling a human body
But i must tell you the ending had me laughing
I was not expecting a twisted ending i Love It
Brilliant write!
Hugsss

[David W Moore III]

love the end! but you know i'm fond of god and her text speak - and she giggled. i guess if my adam and eve were like this, she wouldn't need real housewives!

[Ed Hart]

well, honeycomb my heart with arrows from your bow, ain't you the gal with the storybook hands, that rests my sad places, and touches so close i am well done

[.......]

Goodness, Love the humor in this,
So very well written.

[Brad]

dangerously delicious, you've that whiplash smile when you write

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

You add that dark little sense of humour to the tale, the cynical and snide twist making it all your own. Fantastic work wifey =D