Intuit~

I’m into it

Like Alice into deep holes

Like Snow White into peep holes

Like Huggy Bear’s cheap w****s

 

Intuit on high wire

Tinder sipping wild fire

A stripper with a sign on

Sipping tears from wine swans

 

Hip tilt on a corner

Thumbing both sides of the holster

Action in traction

Young male thing vying for attraction

 

I’m into it

Like Cinderella’s slippers

I sidle, and I slip her

Up the crimson river

Between my teeth I grip her

 

I intuit

My mind is fluid

My skin is nectar

The flavor that bent her

 

I’m into it

Like Doris Day deep in pie

Like Daisy Duke with thick thighs

Like blue birds blown to bits in blue, blue skies

 

Pansexual

Pan’s nuptials

Fairy Tale residuals

 

I’m into it

This Intuit

A fish on the hook of an Inuit

In fishnet stockings

Waist in circles rocking

 

Got it?

Caught it?

Want it?

Intuit

if your into it!

Author's Note

~sometimes muse has a seriously f***ed up sense humor~this totally got away from me~

Reviews

[Kerry O'Connor]

I LOVE it!! The rolling rhythm and over-the-top wordplay is just exceptional. Each grouping builds to the climax - all in all so apposite to your theme:

I’m into it
Like Doris Day deep in pie
Like Daisy Duke with open thighs
Like a blue bird blown to bits in blue, blue skies

[Cafe Reader]

Jake and I are giggling like schoolgirls.

I’m into it
Like Doris Day deep in pie
Like Daisy Duke with thick thighs
Like blue birds blown to bits in blue, blue skies




Your scrumptious mind! (nice a*s too) lol (; Love you girl. We haven't played in so long. LBI this weekend?

[Robin]

=D

[ImagineItAll]

This is so great! Love the feel, love the language, love that you didn't hold back!

[Larry Dyson]

@ Kerry O'Connor ..I like the ?....intensional rewrite in her quote.."Like Daisy Duke with open thighs"...guess ya'll are on the same naughty qua-train track...

[Brad]

hahahahahahaha...this could actually be a rap

[Reese38]

I'm speechless! In part because of the s**t eating grin I'm wearing. You are crazy in the most appealing way!!

[.......]

LOL, I just love the part of Huggy bears cheap w****s. That i s too cute.
I enjoyed the read, thank you for making me smile today I needed that.

[Bare Bohemian]

Totally groovin' intuit.

[LilyT]

Like that boy told you at Applebee's. You are s**t! LOL!! My girl! Nothing compares to you or your muse! Sometimes I believe the gods express themselves through you. I see today they are in rare form.
(:

[Ed Hart]

well, you don't catch a beat like that on mtv...i'd like to see it up close and personal, and, out of harm's way...how about 11:15 next tuesday