Intuit~

I’m into it

Like Alice into deep holes

Like Snow White into peep holes

Like Huggy Bear’s cheap w****s

 

Intuit on high wire

Tinder sipping wild fire

A stripper with a sign on

Sipping tears from wine swans

 

Hip tilt on a corner

Thumbing both sides of the holster

Action in traction

Young male thing vying for attraction

 

I’m into it

Like Cinderella’s slippers

I sidle, and I slip her

Up the crimson river

Between my teeth I grip her

 

I intuit

My mind is fluid

My skin is nectar

The flavor that bent her

 

I’m into it

Like Doris Day deep in pie

Like Daisy Duke with thick thighs

Like blue birds blown to bits in blue, blue skies

 

Pansexual

Pan’s nuptials

Fairy Tale residuals

 

I’m into it

This Intuit

A fish on the hook of an Inuit

In fishnet stockings

Waist in circles rocking

 

Got it?

Caught it?

Want it?

Intuit

if your into it!

Author's Note

~sometimes muse has a seriously f***ed up sense humor~this totally got away from me~

Reviews

[Kerry O'Connor]

I LOVE it!! The rolling rhythm and over-the-top wordplay is just exceptional. Each grouping builds to the climax - all in all so apposite to your theme:

I’m into it
Like Doris Day deep in pie
Like Daisy Duke with open thighs
Like a blue bird blown to bits in blue, blue skies

[flaneur]

Who reviews six year old poems? I guess this guy. Wordplay opens the door to whimsy. Take it from someone who often gets mired in seriousness... Anything that can be tagged as "wtf" (which is how I found it) is a breath of fresh air.

[Desert Dreamer]

This is funny! If you are going to do something, might as well be "intuit" all the way, life a full life.

[Aidz]

Extremely rhythmic and rolled and flowed line after line, so much so I was Intuit too

Seductively brilliant

[FireWoman]

Hip Hop Don't stop! You rocked this, no doubt Sista!

[JelliFyshKissUs]

*flush*
Meet me at Motel 6... five o'clock.

[Haim Kadman]

Yeah I've got it, caught it and want it - great dear Jewel, I'm astounded!!

[David W Moore III]

uhmmm, in answer to your question... YEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH!

and Hell yeah!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Yeah, it ebbed it flowed and it was one hell of a ride!!!

[Ariel B.]

Ahhhh I love this! The slipping and sliding not-quite-almost-rhyming, tilting and whirling into so many things. I know I'll read this one over and over again, out loud for best effect.

[OT]

haha brilliant!!! so whimsical and playful - love the rhymes and tone!!