Impressions~

~humbly Hart~

here there be magik;

 

   we shoulder desire’s impressions

   long after the visible smears have vanished

 

         composites of pressure points, we are

 

   memory’s clay

 

          god's hands work deep in our skin

              

 

 

 

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Author's Note

For Fyreheart's Impersenations Contest~
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Impersonations.-/13796/

Reviews

[Tommy]

Down to the perfect title choice you captured the feel of hart…Ha! I love it! Hard hands create some of the softest touches…

Great Write Ed! Oops ;0)
RLG,
Tommy

[Lilly Negoi]

hartfelt :)...so to speak...

[Cafe Reader]

Like the title of your book, YOU, Selene, are THE JEWEL IN THE LOTUS.

[OT]

are most Hart indeed - as always magical words mistress of the word! haha - the little fingerprint that unwinds upon the tip of an iris - a message within - nice!!

[Reese38]

You have the ability to develop a complete philosophy in the reserved application of a few lines, and that's what magic is.

[David W Moore III]

beauty and magik! even impersonating, you shine through and blind the rest of us with your words.

[LilyT]

'Magik" and more. Your pen is a universe, my love.

[Emily B]

Perfect!!!!

magik indeed :)

[Bare Bohemian]

I can smell Sir Hart in this clay.

[Jibey]

The lingering fragrance of desire's expression does indeed hang about us long after the moments have passed... and yes, we have been made that way --- deeply ingrained...

The economy of words heightens the effect, making the magik work