Topography Of A Well Designed Geisha Who Held Onto Her Mantle Through The Fire~

There is a face in this universe

My hands ache to explore

 

It’s not yours

With you, my fingers curl into a protective fist

Uncurl into a rhythm

Waiting for the day to be over

 

There is a body in this universe

My teeth need to penetrate to the thickest bones

 

It’s not yours

You’re too human

Easily distracted by a pair of pretty eyes

The sway of an ample apple bottom

 

There is a mind in this universe

Rich enough with organic chemicals to sate my agonizing thirst

 

It’s not yours

You fall too often to your knees

In front of ho hum gods

Your scent thick

with a coating of contrived reality

 

There is a thing in this universe

Who knows no peace, no contentment

 

It’s not you

You’re too easy

To please

With a lie

With a body made to mirror desires

Without feeling any

 

There is a face in this universe

Waiting for my hands

 

It’s not yours

 

 

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Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

What I long for within my heart of hearts, you will never be. I want to touch the moon and stars with my fingers and feel them caress my soul. You could never understand that because you cannot dream, you only see the reality of an ugly world and you are not for me........a beautiful confessional piece.

[David W Moore III]

simply phrased, yet hits like a hammer. the all powerful ending that is a blow to the gut: It's not yours.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Yes....you don't entertain me little mouse, I seek other kitties to play with. Why? Your legs are chewed and your whiskers broken; how could you possibly please me. What's that old song with lyrics that go "if you can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with."? f**k that! Seek and destroy lil' geisha girl, seek and destroy.

[arbitrary jane]

oooooh yes. lets have done with dimming the lights for the comfort of others. lets have done with false wardrobes and small minds and mundane faces.
your language here is simple and precise and ... stunningly accurate.

this one, in particular, stood out to me

You fall too often to your knees
In front of ho hum gods
Your scent thick
with a coating of contrived reality

ho hum gods indeed.

the best kind of write.

[Matthew Kult]

A darkly sadistic and viciously brutal ink left drying on the templete of my mind. Had to adjust myself to get back a bit of my swagger. Elegant Poison...so sweet to taste.....so so sweet.

Regards,

Matthew

[SpokenWord]

Knowing what makes us tick enables us to know who will tick with us. Your pen is sharp with the slicing of normality and commonality of most males. I like how you slowly ripe them from how they are too easily swayed too to easily satisfied and all that she seeks isn't found in him. Polite hard slaps the resonate in the receivers ego.

[Ed Hart]

oh, i know this is true

[LilyT]

It's when you open the side drawers of Pandora's box that the would be lovers scatter. The smart ones, anyway. The rest are all deluded or masochists. You play as hard as you compose.



It’s not you
You’re too easy
To please
With a lie
With a body made to mirror desires
Without feeling any


And to this revelation, a deep and echoing sigh.

[Reese38]

A quick sequence pof verbal thrust and parry. No compromise. Do you ever wonder, Selene, if it's even out there, the things we need in another person. Do you ever wonder if that's what we really need at all.

[Liza]

ahhhhh, how delight full! you have captured the superficial distractions of those that live to see ample apple bottoms as a dish for their serving....for some reason Kim Kardashian comes to mind; the media serves her for the distraction to numb us with her beauty and surrounding drama while feeding us advertisements of teeth whitening, skin products, clothing and diet products...oh and don't forget - she got some botox too....only at age 30....