Ripper~

He whimpers

simple predator on the prowl

to twist her

out of love with a spectacular

bespectacled owl

another male trick with a generic knife

stripping girl with half a shelf life

left

her scent

in the flare of his emasculated game

glare

snap her book of spines

in twain

she flails

a smeared smile

wanes

under his whip her

snap her

hands

and there, then

yes there!

under a night sky bleeding rain

she twists

the point he missed

her prey perfume

shedding its victim hue

in coils

she

unhinges

strikes a deadly pose

whispers in a hiss "Bring it"

he gapes

he's rearranged

she, a hiss "You've the dishonor of being my first,

accursed

of Lilith's rage."

parry

thrust

katana

a gun in her glove

head rolls without the usual sass

her ring a slice of brass

his blood with organic concrete

blended

welcome to the era

of this b***h named Vengeance

 

 

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Author's Note

~how much longer will humanity twiddle its diddle and molly coddle these f***ers who prey on children~another baby dead by the hands of a thing disguised as a man~ and he will get treatment because he is "sick"?~ no, humanity is sick for abiding these beasts amongst us~

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

KUDOS! This gave me chills for real! I can empathize with this...it also reminds me of the book and movie 'Perfume' where the protagonist makes perfume out of women - seems this is what this man is after here...truly brilliant poetry. A favorite always!
Light,
Siddartha

[Larry Dyson]

we track them and warn of where they live and nothing is done to change the situation..im open to suggestions or a plan...short of gunning them down like the dogs they are..in the street...what shall we do to show our solidarity?...

[Larry Dyson]

true....what shall we do to take them out?

[Crowley]

Shazam!!!! that was pure unadulterated power mixed with undeniable authority and ditchwater truth. What a necessary message wrapped in a tower of confidence. Hate the situation, loved the words. Great job.

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Fantastically done. You really hit it home with great images and referals throughout. One day, it has to happen, the victim will bite back and do karma's work 10-fold.

[Cafe Reader]

In an insane world you're the voice of new reason.

[LilyT]

Beautiful, righteous yakuza girl. Like your poet woman says Eat them like Air.

[Lachenille Papillion]

you are like no other, dear Cricket, in heart, in soul, in sword, or in pen...
embrace

[.......]

WOW! So very powerful,
So nicely worded as well.
I really enjoyed this write.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Powerful!