UpsideDownAndInsideOutTheWordyHole~

~insidiously inspired~ ;)~ok so I have issues~ but SO DO YOU if you're reading this~ =P

Blessed be the mess of me
Splatter girl in painted pea
Comfy, cozy, nay to that
Kiss a frog, divine a rat

Rattle shackles, bones in roll

Poppa popped out on parole

On the road, a ginger witch

Only she could scratch that itch

Artsy crowds all jumbled, giggling

Scorpion smile, her stinger swinging

They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced, magnum love

 

Pop Pop on her easel

Roadkill!, dinner with a weasel

 

Guttersnipey grace with glee

Blessed be the mess of me

 

 

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Author's Note

~wisdom at the bottom of a latte~ =P

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

so capturing in the word usage....a rhyme to be quoted...in the dirt ...down and to the point...love" They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced"..the allusion to cherry lips and groping them...Slowly with A tongue...
definitly on the issues...mine..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

rhyming , jivey .. rappish .. and yes. wisdom throughout the words that pop and explode.. enjoyed it .. fun to read ..


Chloe

[MuSe Ampoule]

Oooh, a whimsical rhymy thing...like a twisted up fairy tale read whilst standing on one's head. I drank it down with enthusiasm.

[Siddhartha]

Oh, the weasel is gone but as long as she was, wasn't she fun? A beautiful fable told with humour and foot tapping rhythm. Wonderful writing, really.

[Lilly Negoi]

:))))) blessed indeed :)) i think the weasel had no chance in front of that forked and pierced tongue...

[TAO]

I love this. This had me smiling all the way through. Fun with issues, very nice.

[paul]

the rhythm is excellent, nail biting.

'Blessed be the mess of me' -what a beautiful prayer

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It reads like a grown up nursery rhyme...

Kiss a frog, divine a rat
Rattle shackles, bones in roll
Poppa popped out on parole
On the road, a ginger witch
Only she could scratch that itch

you have a way with words in describing just how low our society can go to fill our primal urges.

I want a cup of that latte.

[SpokenWord]

It is true we are all complexed and learning more of ourself through our own eyes. Maybe some can say they have never had a mess of me before but I ain't one of them, LOL. "Kiss a frog, divine a Rat" Can we make this into an anthem because it is so universal. In the end no matter what we should accept ourself first before anyone can else can accept us. I feel your poem does just that acceptance of self is most important.

[Kerry O'Connor]

Oh I so enjoyed this.. read it aloud.. all the better to hear the words rolling off the tongue.

[David W Moore III]

I feel like i just witnessed the chanting of a spell, Mcbeth's three witches standing over their boiling caldron and giggling behind our backs as we try to figure what they've done to us!