UpsideDownAndInsideOutTheWordyHole~

~insidiously inspired~ ;)~ok so I have issues~ but SO DO YOU if you're reading this~ =P

Blessed be the mess of me
Splatter girl in painted pea
Comfy, cozy, nay to that
Kiss a frog, divine a rat

Rattle shackles, bones in roll

Poppa popped out on parole

On the road, a ginger witch

Only she could scratch that itch

Artsy crowds all jumbled, giggling

Scorpion smile, her stinger swinging

They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced, magnum love

 

Pop Pop on her easel

Roadkill!, dinner with a weasel

 

Guttersnipey grace with glee

Blessed be the mess of me

 

 

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Author's Note

~wisdom at the bottom of a latte~ =P

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

so capturing in the word usage....a rhyme to be quoted...in the dirt ...down and to the point...love" They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced"..the allusion to cherry lips and groping them...Slowly with A tongue...
definitly on the issues...mine..

[Solidad]

This to me (which I could very well be wrong) has the same whimsical feel of Jabberwocky by Lewis Carrol. Not to mention it just flat out made me smile :)

[George Korolog]

Latte did the job then. Quick, sharp rhymes in seven accents that really cover a lot of descriptive ground. Loved "scorpion smile, stinger swinging," the best among a host of great word combinations. Only question I have was why did you change the rhyming scheme for the two lines starting with "pop pop on her easel?" It all reads so well and then, BOOM, I tripped over those two lines and had to get back in sync.

[Ed Hart]

you know i grok it

[Moflo]

This was great...I love the images and your wordplay is amazing. The way you crafted each line with like letters really stood out to me, that takes serious talent! Great job.

[Brad]

d****t, give me a sip of that brew...another suessical of abstract purportions!

[Maurice]

Excellent write; your style is always without peer.

[Matthew Kult]

I ran over a cat once, felt bad. Thought I should atleast bury it, burn it,....was kinda hungry so I ate it. I like the flow and the constant splish splash. Great work.

Matthew

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

This was very fun! The sharp little stings and hints accompanised by the bouncy rhythm about it - great job =D

[LilyT]

Wicked woman!!! LOL I love your crazy a*s, and the mess, o yes, blessed be!!!!