UpsideDownAndInsideOutTheWordyHole~

~insidiously inspired~ ;)~ok so I have issues~ but SO DO YOU if you're reading this~ =P

Blessed be the mess of me
Splatter girl in painted pea
Comfy, cozy, nay to that
Kiss a frog, divine a rat

Rattle shackles, bones in roll

Poppa popped out on parole

On the road, a ginger witch

Only she could scratch that itch

Artsy crowds all jumbled, giggling

Scorpion smile, her stinger swinging

They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced, magnum love

 

Pop Pop on her easel

Roadkill!, dinner with a weasel

 

Guttersnipey grace with glee

Blessed be the mess of me

 

 

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Author's Note

~wisdom at the bottom of a latte~ =P

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

so capturing in the word usage....a rhyme to be quoted...in the dirt ...down and to the point...love" They ooooh, they ahhhh, to every stroke

Crack her easel, snatch and grope

Between her cherry lips a tongue

Forked and pierced"..the allusion to cherry lips and groping them...Slowly with A tongue...
definitly on the issues...mine..

[DontBlink158]

Hey cool poem, so i guess i have issues to. Whatever i hear that all the time its fun. Your poem was really cool, ive never read anything like it. A new look on peoms, not all have to be pretty prissy.

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Love this write,
such a fun write.
Nicely written.

[Miss Coral]

You have an incredible talent with wordplay, especially when considering how cohesive your images remain; excellent, truly.

[Joiedevivre]

Blessed be indeed for pouring out these words onto our screens :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Brilliant word play - oh such a fun read this early am! Thanks!

[roy mccarthy]

this was real trippy!
very creative poem!

[Lachenille Papillion]

:)

[Ruth]

All of this is insanely sweet! lol
Superb race of the senses love....a walk through the side of surreal happenings, all meshed with the mess that becomes us!
Never a dull read from you lovely!
xx

[Tommy]

This piece has your customary dark fairytale feel to it…For some reason I see a young girl reciting this as she skips down the road…On her way to get a new tattoo maybe…Ha! I love it!

Great Write Selene!
RLG,
Tommy

[OT]

ahh I love it!! couplet galore haha brilliantly on beat - so natural and whimsical - you give rhyme an added kick of surreal!!