This Karmic Meal~

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imbibed

vibed out

skin sloughed

palms grating

a girl baiting

a curl of lip

oracle debating

you're a channel, baby

hell, I thought I was a hustler

a cluster

he musters his last thrust of mind

giving it good

she takes a dip

a swim in his sinew from behind 

rolling, devastating delight

on her tongue

this rite

in the pleats of a kite

he knows the stream has an end

the stream, the human animal

unwound a god

malcontent

in his fine wines

in his finer lies

the end is the dam built by upright limitations

self imposed, embedded in the bones of nations

some days I say let 'em bleed

let 'em feed the greed

undo a thousand and one good deeds

other days my body weeps

as humanity repeats

repeals

my mind scrambles for a goddamn break

but your mind coils me like a snake

eats it all

drinks

napkin folds

gives it back, redeemed in scrolls

for a future unlikely to be

god in reverse

strike three

absentee

looks on

broken as its progeny

backtrack

flashback

comfy days

fruit of the day

too late

too late

one god shambles backwards

another takes the throne

you gonna be the first to throw the stone?

on and on

one

aim the gun

two

unbuckle her

against the yew

three

killing spree

human stole

deity, pressed against a shoe's sole

ground deep into the dirt

neither learns

not one damn thing

welcome to the unwound reel

of the long run

on the hamster wheel

kneel

fall hard

eat it all

swallow down this karmic meal

you've manifested

torn open now, the final seal.. . .

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Tommy]

Once again you have the rhythm down so perfect for the feel of the piece, and I love the rhyme in your work as of late. What a message in this, or at least how I take it, Ideologies are a dime a dozen, but most of the time they are taken as misconceptions to their reality. Maybe the most surreal subject of them all religion.

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cool!

[Jibey]

Surreal indeed... What is needed is a guidebook!