Poets Paired~

I approach in prints

Fingerprints in swirls

Press my patterns

Into your shoulder blades

Lotus tattoos illuminate the base of your skull

Where dreams breathe

On the nights when sanctuary displays through touch

Tracing spine trance

While

Lip prints in cupid bow

Complement the curve of your jaw

Dyeing your dimpled smile with blush

Languid and unhurried

While

Heart prints in resilient rhythm

Caress your rib’s cage

Compelling

Soul prints

In ink between your dancing fingers and mine

Playing cat’s cradle with a thousand words

You add your prints

Between us

There is poetry

 

 

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Reviews

[Lydia Blackwell]

This was a beautiful, sensual, intimate look at touching and how good it is for the soul. I am sure it could be taken in many different ways, but this is how I saw it. Intimacy does not always have to involve sex. It is a moment of recognition between two people. This was so so lovely. I really enjoyed reading it!

[Pax Analog]

Poetic symbiosis as acupressure points.

Synchronicitous: I dreamed last night I said to a lover, "I'm a theologian of skin."

Welcome tone of elegant silence, appropriate for the soul of snow and the Christic season.

[vido.]

im not sure why just these two lines but when you mention, Press my patterns

Into your shoulder blades. it spoke right to me. incredible.

[David W Moore III]

yeeeaahh... hmmm, not as good as your usual...

cr@p, who am i kidding? love it. Awesome love poem.

[.]

becoming one with someone..beautiful..summed up in the last line..

[Maurice]

Yes, breathtaking is the word. You never cease to amaze me.

[Sweets]

This is so creative and outstanding :)
Amazing, as always :)

[Gauge "Rage" Parks]

To know that i can read the poems you write is grand, im so impressed once again and this gives you the feeling of a tattoo and the feel of being naked in a mayjor pool of ink..but also i can see danceing and someone expressing so much. love this poem....

[The Cougar's Den]

I can almost see you dancing ....

Playing cat’s cradle with a thousand words
You add your prints
Between us
There is poetry

Very beautifully written, and so well done....*sigh*

[paul]

a remarkable way with words

[Crowley]

The play between creatives is a special one indeed, the energy second to none. Watch out for the occasional dryspell though, it can cause sparks of a different sort. Nice stuff.....