Swells~

~dipped in inverted scripture~

Obsidian pupils dilate

malachite orbs

slivered

slender rings

rapturous slice

fragmented

undulating

wrists

ankles

sing with bells

predatory hips

surge

swells of silk

oscillate

drum beats

surge

travel muscles

expose

ruby tongue

trill crescendo

in arch

burgundy wine on a tabletop

betrayal like musk

in the auditorium

her perfume lean

heady

she whispers

to the angel

broken down by age

“bring me the head of John the Baptist”

what was he to do

confronted so, by the glory

of original sin

 

 

 

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Reviews

[TAO]

I love the way this ended. I'm not sure what to take from this, or how to read it... Too many different angles (not a bad thing). It has this classic/new age feel to me... Like somehow you made the old and the new to become some super-hybrid (feeling). I definitely enjoyed reading this (but then, who couldn't?).

[Jibey]

Great capture of this dramatic scene - the girl dancing naked, the king proud in his arousal... a cracker waiting to be pulled... to the accompaniment of hell's bells... it was a case of head for head...

[My Fair Lady]

Whew. The power of a woman. MMMM mmm.

[Cafe Reader]

I'm salivating. (Jake's gonna kick my a*s.)

[Kerry O'Connor]

OOOOH Yeah!!

You captured all the undertones of hedonism and thwarted desire here.
I just love: ankles sing with bells predatory hips surge...
Beauteous.

[Robin]

what you just did to my synethesia blessed mind ~

[JulieNorell]

Wow, This was very good! Great Job! Keep writing!

[Dream Weaver]

Blushing beauty above and beyond..
Lovely simply lovely!

[Brad]

is there a salome theme going on today that i don't know about? this was like chocolate syrup...mmm mmm