Candy Cane Stripper With Sword~

~ helliday senryu written last year for the AntiClaus and Senryu Group~if you got no sense of humor don't click~ republished by request of my sik friends~ lol =P

Candy cane stripper

Mistletoe, I eat your face

Lick my lolli, pinch!

 

 

 

 

copyright: *raises hand and hides behind Blitzen's weed stash*

 

ALL RIGHTS Perverse

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

Talk about coinkidinks... The ad at the top of the page rightnow is for hand made swords!
Now on to this fine example of senru form. The complexity layered into this 5-7-5 is mind boggling. There's the social commentary, the political statement, and of course the autobiographical story of the candy stripper is totally endearing. I'm thoroughly amazed that you were able to slip in the comment about global warming and the hypocrisy of the protesting of Elizabeth Edward's funeral. Then there was the weaving of ancient Japanese mythology... Breathtaking. The goddess lolly to be licked? Genius. I'm not sure I wouldve had the conjure to call out Plato like you so obviously did here, but he'll, he's dead, how hard can he hit back? Right? This poem puts you in the league of Ralph Waldo limericson, Percy Helly, and Lord Bygones. Great job!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Um...is this where I go to get my lap dance?

All I can pay you in is a roll of quarters though...got pockets??? no, I guess not in that outfit!

All rights perverse lol!!!!

[Solitaire-P0ette]

Lol wow!! lol

[Zackery Alan Daley]

HAHA loved it. Great concept, flow, and overall badassness.

[Nobody.]

Nice! abstract humor dressed in nothing but high heels and Christmas candy. What could be better than that?

[Maurice]

This was priceless.

[Cafe Reader]

You're killin it!!!!! ROTFLMFAO!!!!

*stuffs a bill in your g-string and licks your lolli*

[Robin]

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAA !!!

[Kerry O'Connor]

The laugh burst out of me on the lick my lolli line! Classic.