Candy Cane Stripper With Sword~

Candy Cane Stripper With Sword~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~ helliday senryu written last year for the AntiClaus and Senryu Group~if you got no sense of humor don't click~ republished by request of my sik friends~ lol =P

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Candy cane stripper

Mistletoe, I eat your face

Lick my lolli, pinch!

 

 

 

 

copyright: *raises hand and hides behind Blitzen's weed stash*

 

ALL RIGHTS Perverse

© 2011 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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Talk about coinkidinks... The ad at the top of the page rightnow is for hand made swords!
Now on to this fine example of senru form. The complexity layered into this 5-7-5 is mind boggling. There's the social commentary, the political statement, and of course the autobiographical story of the candy stripper is totally endearing. I'm thoroughly amazed that you were able to slip in the comment about global warming and the hypocrisy of the protesting of Elizabeth Edward's funeral. Then there was the weaving of ancient Japanese mythology... Breathtaking. The goddess lolly to be licked? Genius. I'm not sure I wouldve had the conjure to call out Plato like you so obviously did here, but he'll, he's dead, how hard can he hit back? Right? This poem puts you in the league of Ralph Waldo limericson, Percy Helly, and Lord Bygones. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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lol...a great falala senyru....stripping the stripes in style!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ha ha

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've reached a new pinnacle with this senyru! Brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it alot
It's deliciously evil
Hmm I want a taste :P

great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

too funny this is! Now, I want too see the grinch in a santa suit sneak up behind to tickle this litttle whoo's fancy and steal her lolli.. right out from under her joan of arch sword ...snow flake style...cold wet, and no two alike

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lmao
this is great,
nice job:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Holy crap I'm LMAO!! This is just dripping wickedness, and I adore it ever so!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This b***h is crazy, but she be my b***h.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl, your mind works in astonishing ways, and I love every minute of it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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My kind of candy cane stripper...indeed. Blitzen has weed? I should've figured. Selene; short, sweet, to the point, and no pun intended on the last two. I need something better to say than "great work" or "nicely done".

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 10, 2010
Last Updated on November 16, 2011
Tags: senryu, my lolli up your you know what, the cafe goes helliday, south park, bad candy cane, tongue in cheek, satire, helliday

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