Candy Cane Stripper With Sword~

~ helliday senryu written last year for the AntiClaus and Senryu Group~if you got no sense of humor don't click~ republished by request of my sik friends~ lol =P

Candy cane stripper

Mistletoe, I eat your face

Lick my lolli, pinch!

 

 

 

 

copyright: *raises hand and hides behind Blitzen's weed stash*

 

ALL RIGHTS Perverse

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

Talk about coinkidinks... The ad at the top of the page rightnow is for hand made swords!
Now on to this fine example of senru form. The complexity layered into this 5-7-5 is mind boggling. There's the social commentary, the political statement, and of course the autobiographical story of the candy stripper is totally endearing. I'm thoroughly amazed that you were able to slip in the comment about global warming and the hypocrisy of the protesting of Elizabeth Edward's funeral. Then there was the weaving of ancient Japanese mythology... Breathtaking. The goddess lolly to be licked? Genius. I'm not sure I wouldve had the conjure to call out Plato like you so obviously did here, but he'll, he's dead, how hard can he hit back? Right? This poem puts you in the league of Ralph Waldo limericson, Percy Helly, and Lord Bygones. Great job!

[EMF]

Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. Absolutley wonderful. Terrific. I laughed so hard I now require a hernia Op. And I'm suing for the medial bill. F******g wonderful. Between the poem and the picture You've made a middle aged man very happy and it didn't require little blue pills.
Well, given time I may come to enjoy it.

WHY WON@T THIS DAMN BOX LET ME PUT IN MORE THAN 100?

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I remember this little minx..LOL

[Loki Ragna-rock]

dragged to late house calls
by Cupid, Prancer, Donder
through wet snow they dash

it isn't any wonder
Santa's got a rash

- by a wise man who once said:

"Dashing through the snow
Don't make me show my fangs.
Passengers will please refrain
From ragging on my bangs."

(from "Deck Us All With Edamame", with permission)

Occupy Christmas!!

[LilyT]

You're wonderfully deranged! LOL!!!!

[Aidz]

Lick with coiled tongue....

[SkinlessFrank]

thumbs up?

[Muse]

Omg, you are nasty and brilliant!! xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now I know what to ask Satin Claws for this year ;)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow and again wow LOL

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Candy~stripper~I eat your lolli~Mistletoe,
UNDER THE COVER OF "Mistletoe"~
Lick my lolli, pinch!~~~NEVER TO AWAKEN~~!!!
(pinch!~Lick my lolli~God~~~must i wake-whooosh-Jesus :)))

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