Diamond Back~

My mind, Kahlua

pouring suppositions

over

supper, hungry

for lips

busy exhaling

cosmic formulas

at a bar

 

Praline seduction

lady fingers

diaphanous

against the pressure

of your genius

pressing

cerebral blooms

open

layer by layer

creamy core shaken and stirred

served straight up

on my diamond back

coiled to strike

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. Photo made the words come alive. I saw diamond backs at a distance in the Texas desert. I believe best to leave them alone. They want no part of man. Man need to leave them in peace. I like the description and the ending. Diamond backs snakes are one of natures wonders. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[serpent]

the beauty of poison..and diamond back serpents beautifully penned...
great imagery..left me speechless

[Desert Dreamer]

I am envisioning
"lips
busy exhaling
cosmic formulas"
and I imagine that if one wanted to seduce a rattlesnake, those cosmic formulas would be necessary.

Sitting waiting for the prey to meet her at that bar. Would there be pleasantries past between the two, would there be a wink? Or would she just strike. Great piece. Great Imagery.

[FireWoman]

May those coils find a place to relax and stretch without someone or something making you wish you were made of marble.

[Brad]

allright, who's gonna suck the poison out?

[Aven]

shawn renee said it best, hehe... this is one of your utmost treasures... so wonderful!

[JelliFyshKissUs]

This is going into my favorites. Enough said.

[.]

My dear-my goodness &
"My mind, Kahlua pouring suppositions" & chase it with Bacardi 151-
down my throat-(did i dream this?)
"seduction lady fingers diaphanous against the pressure"
(I repeat-Did i dream this Luv???
" layer by layer creamy core shaken and stirred"
fantisies are so so sweet with your poetry-
"served straight up on my diamond back coiled to strike"

IF ONLY A REALITY...Luv the images ;)

[Jibey]

The image of the snake poised caps off the images of longing for sensual pleasure... the pressure and pressing was striking... and the creamy core of the nutty chocolate....

I liked the brevity and clarity of this... and the charm of your words with their slippery pleasures