Kali Manifest~

~senryu embedded in haiga~

Kali Manifest~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trance cleaves girl in twain

hindbrain unbolts chthonic flood

disgorging Kali

 

 

 

 

Photocopyright:2010/vssmd/lilytotemarts/amusemusepress

 

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Author's Note

~for senryu slayers~ word of the day~
chthonic~[thon-ik] or chthonian [thoh-nee-uhn]: of or pertaining to deities, spirits, and other beings dwelling under the earth; of or relating to the underworld

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

A cumulative sci-fi feel to this senryu, a la Species, the mythic reference and keyword converging.

Fabulous poster-like haiga version too. You could have a whole haiga poster line selling like hotcakes.

I love the powerful dynamics you muster in a flash. "Chthonic" is a very Scorpio-muscular word, which of course suits your Ascendant to a tee.

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just what I would expect from your mystical mind..

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

Kali's a simple girls name if it was not meant to say the wife of Shiva and the malevolent form of the Mother Goddess. I got a simple girl vibe off the female in the poem but aren't we all simple? Dont we all have as much power in soul as a goddess? Well anyway, wonderful sick heart drop gut to the floor sense raiser!

Yay. I knew you'd heave up something indescribable from the bowels of your brain for this one. It was just too mythical for you to resist. Your picture is awesome and so fitting.

[David W Moore III]

Okay, I hadn't even started it yet, but no use now... Apex reached

[David W Moore III]

Wow... Deleting my lame attempt now

[Robin]

Electrifying ~

[C]

So good, kitty, hot and prowly and predatory. Oh yes, and the poem too. ;-)

[Ed Hart]

underworld
boy was girled
unfurled, whirled

kaligraphied
lived and died
the girl inside

[Kerry O'Connor]

A work of Art. Perfection.

[Cafe Reader]

Your seduction is risky. I LOVE it!
That's you in the photo, isn't it? Just, wow!