Kali Manifest~

~senryu embedded in haiga~

Kali Manifest~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trance cleaves girl in twain

hindbrain unbolts chthonic flood

disgorging Kali

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~for senryu slayers~ word of the day~
chthonic~[thon-ik] or chthonian [thoh-nee-uhn]: of or pertaining to deities, spirits, and other beings dwelling under the earth; of or relating to the underworld

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

A cumulative sci-fi feel to this senryu, a la Species, the mythic reference and keyword converging.

Fabulous poster-like haiga version too. You could have a whole haiga poster line selling like hotcakes.

I love the powerful dynamics you muster in a flash. "Chthonic" is a very Scorpio-muscular word, which of course suits your Ascendant to a tee.

[Bard Constantine]

I had to look up Kali to get a perspective on the relation to yourself... and found out how fitting a symbol she is... the internal disgorged from the recesses of the mind, appropriate for a dark goddess whose appearance belies her personality...

[luciddreamer]

What a fantastic write...love it ....feels my heart with warmth....is that strange?
lol...:)
Peace
Robin

[TAO]

Well, I'd be on my feet clapping right now, but this headache appears to have one up on me. Needless to say, outstanding. Words as magical as when last I read.

[Dani]

great write, and the poster looks awesome.

[Marie Harrison]

Hands down remarkable. What a vixen you are.

[Goodbye]

Such power unleashed here - loving the chthonic flood...

[paul]

brilliant stuff

[Dinesh Sairam]

A nice, if not, sur-real senyru. But I'd recommend you change the last line. Because, 'Kali' is technically the goddess of death, and one can't 'disgore' the goddess of death herself. Or maybe you meant some other, and I didn't understand.. :)

Keep writing :)

[Geralyn Miller]

Hmm, Kali, vengeance personified; I like it, a definite thought provoker.

[Crowley]

too cool for school....loved it.