Eyes Beholder~

~playing with colors~

blue eyed girls will love you

brown eyed girls, warm your heart

green eyed girls will smile

their velvet smoke screen

on love’s wall

blue eyed girls will catch you

brown eyed girls, break the fall

green eyed girls will weep alone

 

unable to unbind their nature

 

to unbend those stubborn arms

 

 

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Reviews

[The Warrior Poet]

I love this.

I have to leap out into the aisle and yell - "NOT SO!" as I can bear witness to a blue eyed watching a falling heart with a half-smile - never catching nor breaking the fall. That being said - my green eyed wife is always there to pick me and dust me off but only AFTER I crash down into reality's barren tarmac.

I have an image of trying to see through the "velvet smoke screen" to try and make out the "writing on the wall" and not quite making it out until finally, falling, I am caught by blue eyes from "somewhere else"

[My Fair Lady]

I love the simplicity of this piece.

[Alicante lullaby]

pretty play-beautiful,colourful.

[Tate Morgan]

This is one of the best i have read from you

[James Crow]

It's very alive; the colours float like the feeling of watching an artist while they're painting.

[J.M]

I love it - the way the colours are tied in with their natures. The imagery is also fantastic 'their velvet smokescreen
on love's wall'. - Brilliant poem.

[Matthew Kult]

I do love the green eyed girls.

Regards,

Matthew

[Cafe Reader]

Creative and original. Very good!

[luciddreamer]

I like this ....good write
Peace
Robin

So I warmed your heart and my fat a*s broke your fall. Awesome.

[David W Moore III]

why the green eyed girls? I LOVE green eyed girls (don't tell my wife)
will smile their velvet smoke screen on loves wall - fantastic!