Coruscating Arpeggio~

~senryu in three square hip rotations~ ;)~

Hip drops in pearl sphere

Coruscate curves in motion

Sparks applause and bids

 

                ~*~

 

Coruscating trance

Dream sequence in red beryl

My quill to your heart

 

 

                 ~*~

 

Woman reverie

Coruscated his mornings

Stars in his deep cup

 

 

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Author's Note

~Naked Poet's Word of The Day Senryu Honey~

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

hip drops oh dear my surreal queen...i acquiesce to the sound of your voice...the one and only Queen of the Surreal...dream woman..i wish i were adonis...for my every every....you are the QUINTESSENTIAL QUINTESSENTIAL...i been drinkin...however...art is everything and you are at the forefront of my mind...

[TAO]

Well...umm...we are kind of jealous. :P Favorite.

[C]

You are a cupful of stars.

[FireWoman]

Belly dancer, snake charmer, web walker, baby you are all of those things!

[Maurice]

Coruscate, an unlikely word to appear in a poem, yet you have employed it brilliantly here. Bravo.

[Amy Bumpas]

This reminds of a a sacrifice, yet the willingness to give.

[David W Moore III]

After this ode to coruscation, I might even go brave twilight! You writewithsuch sensuality and presence. I need to go find my gem book to look up a picture of the ultra rare red beryl that meanders through so much of your imagery. Your coruscation is bright enough to fill pall ourcups. In an innocent way of course.

[My Fair Lady]

Oooo.. this was a graceful dance that I enjoyed so much. Mysterious and sexy as the dancer herself.

[AlieahRose]

I'M TRYING TO FIND NEW WORDS...
TO TELL YOU...
HOW GOOD YOU ARE...
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL...

If i wasn't coruscating before, I am now. And gyrating. Little do you know I took a belly dance class for a while a few years back. This makes me miss it.

[Kesha]

Lovely formed, very enjoyable! Nice choice of words! :)