Coruscating Arpeggio~

~senryu in three square hip rotations~ ;)~

Hip drops in pearl sphere

Coruscate curves in motion

Sparks applause and bids

 

                ~*~

 

Coruscating trance

Dream sequence in red beryl

My quill to your heart

 

 

                 ~*~

 

Woman reverie

Coruscated his mornings

Stars in his deep cup

 

 

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Author's Note

~Naked Poet's Word of The Day Senryu Honey~

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

hip drops oh dear my surreal queen...i acquiesce to the sound of your voice...the one and only Queen of the Surreal...dream woman..i wish i were adonis...for my every every....you are the QUINTESSENTIAL QUINTESSENTIAL...i been drinkin...however...art is everything and you are at the forefront of my mind...

[Ed Hart]

your quill to my heart

[Kerry O'Connor]

My favourite line is 'my quill to your heart' - but each senryu is a lovely gem.

[Jennifer Lenhardt]

this is beautiful and love the choice of words. favorite line of all: my quill to your heart. what a word picture!

[hanzabonanza]

you use the most amazing words in your poem, so many enticing layers to unravel...

[Blossom]

I love this.

[Brad]

now~i am HIP-notized...

[Dark Empress]

I love this

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Selene,

Yeah...you can't distract me with moving pictures otherwise I have no idea what's going on around me. Great Senryu with a hippy shake shake. I get so confused by the 5 - 7- 5 I just can't handle it.

regards,

Matthew

[Dream Weaver]

Ooof, now this is delightful..The vid ain't half bad either :)