Coruscating Arpeggio~

~senryu in three square hip rotations~ ;)~

Hip drops in pearl sphere

Coruscate curves in motion

Sparks applause and bids

 

                ~*~

 

Coruscating trance

Dream sequence in red beryl

My quill to your heart

 

 

                 ~*~

 

Woman reverie

Coruscated his mornings

Stars in his deep cup

 

 

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Author's Note

~Naked Poet's Word of The Day Senryu Honey~

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

hip drops oh dear my surreal queen...i acquiesce to the sound of your voice...the one and only Queen of the Surreal...dream woman..i wish i were adonis...for my every every....you are the QUINTESSENTIAL QUINTESSENTIAL...i been drinkin...however...art is everything and you are at the forefront of my mind...

[Andrew Wright]

Delicious. Selene, you might just be my favorite drink.

[jinjahman]

stars in his deep cup..very appealing. The rest of the language is very rich without being a distraction. May I say well done on a brilliant poem! I'm hip to it!

[No regret]

Coruscating trance

Dream sequence in red beryl

My quill to your heart



beautiful words selene. loved it .

[Sweets]

I loved this
It's so deep and full of meanings :)
Thanks for the request ! :D

[Lydia Blackwell]

the first thing I thought of, before I scrolled down, was belly dancers, since I do a little belly dancing, i know what a hip drop is! This was a wonderful response to an age old dance. Applause!!

[emmajoy]

The dance of the snake, beckoning the naive onlooker nearer and nearer - only to snatch the final ending into darkeness!

Your video is as exotically erotic as your poem, luring the reader into a place outside the realm of cigarette smoke and s'market trolleys .. nobody can do it better,

Coruscating trance
Dream sequence in red beryl
My quill to your heart

Delight and delighted in twelve words.

[Ruth]

Phenomenal!
Beautiful wording, great vid too!
Sensational love!
xx

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Coruscating sky.
Bodes, "Careful Sweetness Listens."
Someone is something.

Innocent brilliance,
You hide from scintillation,
cowering in madness

Dear Petal, You Blush,
retarding my advances.
let me make believe.

[.]

beautiful poem-oops! very, very beautiful.
i cannot wait for the reverie of the night
and all the starry dreams i shall dream.

B/W

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Please tell the poetry police to enforce me never knowing you past dark, neither allowed to view any more of your poety. T O U C H E ! to the heart. Cookin!