Sanguine Thrice~

~senryu blushing~

Weeping willow girl

sanguine  for hearth tales from his heart

her smile sips lattes

 

Solid man in field

sanguine capillaries burst

she offers a sip

 

October dawn surge

sanguine sky brush strokes her skin

he engraves her charm

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~a kiss is just a kiss but is a smile ever really just a smile when its playing with the rim of a coffee cup deep into the latte~ ;)~

Reviews

[emmajoy]

aha, something new and i think different from one of the queens of word .. wonderful, dear friend .. deft words, deft format .. you're just deftly deft at everything. :)

seriously, this rings of a gently suggestive something .. a beckoning, a hithering .. quite subtle but tempting.

[Aven]

is there any form of poetry you don't master? ;)

blushing senryu
brings blood rushing to my cheeks
not just once but thrice

I'm honored my friend
to see you express yourself
in 5-7-5

may our sanguine threads
get tangled every morning
over hot lattes

[Robin]

you look good in senryu ~

[Dream Weaver]

A good green tea cleanses all...I really should switch over ;)
Another wonderful write....