Sanguine Thrice~

~senryu blushing~

Weeping willow girl

sanguine  for hearth tales from his heart

her smile sips lattes

 

Solid man in field

sanguine capillaries burst

she offers a sip

 

October dawn surge

sanguine sky brush strokes her skin

he engraves her charm

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~a kiss is just a kiss but is a smile ever really just a smile when its playing with the rim of a coffee cup deep into the latte~ ;)~

Reviews

[emmajoy]

aha, something new and i think different from one of the queens of word .. wonderful, dear friend .. deft words, deft format .. you're just deftly deft at everything. :)

seriously, this rings of a gently suggestive something .. a beckoning, a hithering .. quite subtle but tempting.

[David W Moore III]

a latte smile is something else altogether ;), but for me it needs to be an iced latte (maybe that says something about me!

[Kerry O'Connor]

Love your weeping willow girl... deeply sensual piece.

[Amy Bumpas]

This is dark and mischevious with a twist of just being wickedly
teasing:))

[Maurice]

Lovely senryu. I can always count on you to brighten a day with your poems.

[kuru]

masterful creation...you've been hit with the senryu fever

[No use.]

mmm.. beautiful senryu thrice,
reminds me of my parents union

[Brad]

somebody put a little too much foam in your latte dis mornin? i like your painting of a simple situation with such fathomless meaning...

[Matthew Kult]

A wonderful Senryu masterfully done.

with Love,

Jaidyn

[Ed Hart]

would that it were so
lips across the latte glow
your smile growing slow