Sanguine Thrice~

~senryu blushing~

Weeping willow girl

sanguine  for hearth tales from his heart

her smile sips lattes

 

Solid man in field

sanguine capillaries burst

she offers a sip

 

October dawn surge

sanguine sky brush strokes her skin

he engraves her charm

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~a kiss is just a kiss but is a smile ever really just a smile when its playing with the rim of a coffee cup deep into the latte~ ;)~

Reviews

[emmajoy]

aha, something new and i think different from one of the queens of word .. wonderful, dear friend .. deft words, deft format .. you're just deftly deft at everything. :)

seriously, this rings of a gently suggestive something .. a beckoning, a hithering .. quite subtle but tempting.

[Jeff Loquist]

she knew exactly what she was doing with that smile

[Closedown]

Fantabulous. What more can I say? Simply wonderful.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

This has just filled my face with sanguinity and my heart with awe. I think you've found your new knack.

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Patchwork girl, Hey, I'm on the other side of the planet. Why you gotta play with your Note like that, cmon, realizing, you're Latteing and I'm sweet 17, under, playing, in the dark, neighbors in bed long ago. Listening to some cool New Age Chill Lounge expressions. see through, cosmic pie, swank, Heart Break, Cigarette kinda girly, feeling an oxygen night at least high.

[Moonflower]

You poetry is always a breath of fresh air~Unique imagery~

[FireWoman]

I'd gladly share a latte (or two) with you, soy, of course. =)

[alan peter kelly]

you write with memorable literary brushstroke...effecting and warm tingle in my chest as much as the cognitive sparks in my head...

[C]

A curving closed-lip Mona Lisa smile over a steaming cup......

[My Fair Lady]

Ooo.. He engraves her charm. Nice.

[TAO]

Well, now...this is no simple magick... This is creation...