Nymph~

~decanting heart~

 

 

Sad carapace

I am peeling you off

Following

Soft shell crabs

Into the joyous sea!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Ed Hart]

don't leave, i want to watch you sip your cup...oh my, look what's happening to you...i've never seen the like...i knew we shouldn't have come to the shore this morning...oh, how am i going to explain this...she's disappeared into the sea...i only wanted to touch...oh my, oh my...why did she have to go

[Andrew Wright]

Here again I find you giving me a smile.

...I swear I take too much from you.

[Travis Lawrence]

The exclamation point makes the entire poem wondrous! Thank you for this brilliant moment you've allowed me to experience :-)

[ice]

To be reborn,
Up from blood and foam.
Out of the oceans roar,
Venus reborn;
Drying in the sun.
Rid of the banal character.

Just had to add that, not that it needed anything...Love this poem

ice

[Khitii Lae-Ahn]

meaning upon meaning tossed about in the rolling current...

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

To be the first footprint on an uncharted beach. This was a great refresher to my insatiable appetite for the short and sweet. You have a knack to make the reader linger with your words. Absolutely excellent. Bravo, for your ability to capture the harmony of thought, feeling, and interpretation.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Succinct and to the point, this poem is a wonderful reminder for us all to shed the hardness of life and free fall into the oblivion of joyful living.

Linda Marie

[Sweets]

Sweet and short :)
Love it x)
I actually love all of your work :D

[Lydia Blackwell]

I think I just need to read more of your work. You left me teased a bit. with this one.

[DrSprinkz73]

Straight to the point with a million meanings to the five fluid lines that makes someone ponder the wonders of fate forever..
Once again (and I'm sure you're used to hearing this) you never cease to amaze my inner artist :)

[The Cute 1]

i like this