Boy Over Bridge~

Boy Over Bridge~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~Tyler Clementi~I am So Sorry They Killed You ~

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Maybe it was a soul thing

or the fever;

night was an ocean

girl was a bridge

boy’s footprints left stains of pain

shame in stride

stripped

he climbed

her rib

went over. . . .

maybe it was the fever;

she collapsed her foundation

into mermaid scales

fairy tale

caught him by a shoe

floating

upside down

her eyes blue

her nose tip touching his nose tip

bubble

air

she stroked his hair

tried to apologize for all of humanity

but fishies came hungry

fishies above

below

girl arched

steel in her hips

boy floated down

girl stopped being a bridge

took another scar

for mankind . . . .

maybe it was a soul thing. . . .

 

 

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Tyler Clementi~

© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~after having his privacy invaded by two other Rutgers students~videos of intimate interactions streamed lived on the net~Tyler Clemeti took his own life by jumping off the George Washington Bridge~
a click is not just a click~ as we are learning~ sometimes a click is a death sentence~

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painfully tragic yet so mesmerisingly told...you breathe the emotion...the pain...the loss...into the reader...allowing them to experience it as if it were their own...

so many fail to consider how their actions might affect those who they act out against...they fail to see their own malice...fail to think before they act...to ponder the significance of what they do...to evaluate the possible consequences...to realise the impotrance of their cruelty

you have captured and shared the message and the meaning superbly...thank you for sharing this...for writing it...for lending your voice to such a poignant topic

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yes, many incidents like this happen everyday and ending up with the similar tragic end... beautiful poem....

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I heard about this tragedy, and a shame people can't be who
they want to be.

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How Touching.

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Hello Selene,

A beautiful thing you have done here. We all need an escape...ashame his had to be permanent...

Regards,

Matthew

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beautiful poem for a sad situation.

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Wow, the story in this poem is so tragic, but you paid a lovely tribute to this man, you sure know how to touch the soul. :)

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you know how to touch the soul, bypassing brain and eyes and dive straight to where it really matters. There have been far too many kids hurt by bullies. The internet just magnifies the hurt and sometimes the result, but don't overlook the plain old ordinary verbal bully that leaves scars for life rather than death. I think there are countless more victims that have lived through their ordeal but limp along in some way for decades to come as a result. Sad both ways.

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A lovely tribute. Poor man. Such talent, such waste.

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How very sad... and what a poignant memorial you write

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And they build jails for convicts, hell for sinners and heavens for humans. Who is say who is who?

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