Seed Vicious~

~ from a free form impromptu poetry slam last night~

U taught me to crawl

how to take a kick

to take it like a brand new kick

a drug

unplug

 with a bullet

ecstasy

spreading blue

a sky ripped in two

déjà vu

girl come undone

reloading love

trigger happy

on all fours

chin dip to the floor

smoky eyes

 uncanny cry

hustle

alibi

wrist deep in his wine

he bubbles music

pursed lips

blood kiss

white teeth

she kneels across his jerking knee

die happy

snap your fingers

snappy

dresser

Limelight

evanesce

with the best

of the monsters

in leather

“TELL HER!”

what you’ve done

what you want

how you want it

in love from above

or from under

a gun

jammed in your spine

jamming

the red room

a bed

pulse

a light

u taught me to crawl

how to get the most drink from skin

drink it  til the body arches back in bliss

just like a kick

u taught me how to take it

rewind it

unscale it

I scale it

claws

pause

in your pulse

between the bones of your hips

your eyes

I love that look!

feeding the bliss to the pain

the death

to the rain

outside

wash away my purity

down a storm gutter

I ain’t this

or that

just another

other

being a little mother

doesn’t make me less

of a killer

just a discerning sinner

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~the title is of course a play on Sid Vicious as I was imaging him back at CBGB's where we saw him several times before he liberated Nancy of her life~and no I'm not that old~ I had a bad babysitter who thought it was more than appropriate to drag a nine year old to the Village to CB's and the Cat Club as often as possible~ she called it cultural diversity ~ lol~ I did love my Kat thought she really knew how to give a kid freshly transplanted from communist eastern europe to America serious culture shock~ ;)~

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Now there's the Sultry Selene I know so well. Dripping me down the pages of sensual affliiction with the accompaniment of Sid Vicious's guitar. My god his was just as bizarre and erotic as he was talented, especially once his affinity, Nancy came into the picture. Such a strange and yet common love they had.

I'm getting off the subject. Beautiful work, Selene, as always.

[Geralyn Miller]

Sweet erotica at its finest! Witty, and far more elegant than Sid deserves.

Can you believe I practically started rapping this! Well brilliant work by the way! I have so many favourite lines in this poem! Great work Selene!

-SaimaS

[Janice Ann]

I am not suprised that you threw me up in the air with this one. What a wonderful ride, the story, the erotic, passionate, evilness of that love...you held my interest and my breath...great work, as always.

[My Fair Lady]

Well, that was intense... just as the entire relationship of Sid & Nancy. Your play on words and other phrase choices were sultry and sexy yet laced with murderous undertones that eventually leads us to the end.. R.I.P Sid & Nancy

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

nice ting ting tang bam flow

[Globy]

one more great writing.. enjoyed every word :)
well done :)

[Brad]

a look back, into the rich and yet sometimes volitile histories of ourselves and others

[Dream Weaver]

You know I feel you with this write, you know my story there. ;-)
Great write Selene, your description is flawless..

[Wildfleour]

You rocked it. No surprise. xxxx's

[DannyLynne Riley]

omg I am a HUGE HUGE Sid and Nancy fan I lived that whole scene...a long long time ago and the poem ...breathtaking ms. Selene and I would expect nothing less from you...a fabulous writer such a gift you posess you have this ability to present things in such a way that is raw and exposed and yet brilliantly beautiful at the same time and it is this type of writing I am so passionately driven to try and create it is because of writers like yourself that challenge us newbies to hone our craft and strive to become better writers...as always ms. Selene I am honored to once again visit your world of words...thankyou -DannyLynne