Seed Vicious~

~ from a free form impromptu poetry slam last night~

U taught me to crawl

how to take a kick

to take it like a brand new kick

a drug

unplug

 with a bullet

ecstasy

spreading blue

a sky ripped in two

déjà vu

girl come undone

reloading love

trigger happy

on all fours

chin dip to the floor

smoky eyes

 uncanny cry

hustle

alibi

wrist deep in his wine

he bubbles music

pursed lips

blood kiss

white teeth

she kneels across his jerking knee

die happy

snap your fingers

snappy

dresser

Limelight

evanesce

with the best

of the monsters

in leather

“TELL HER!”

what you’ve done

what you want

how you want it

in love from above

or from under

a gun

jammed in your spine

jamming

the red room

a bed

pulse

a light

u taught me to crawl

how to get the most drink from skin

drink it  til the body arches back in bliss

just like a kick

u taught me how to take it

rewind it

unscale it

I scale it

claws

pause

in your pulse

between the bones of your hips

your eyes

I love that look!

feeding the bliss to the pain

the death

to the rain

outside

wash away my purity

down a storm gutter

I ain’t this

or that

just another

other

being a little mother

doesn’t make me less

of a killer

just a discerning sinner

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~the title is of course a play on Sid Vicious as I was imaging him back at CBGB's where we saw him several times before he liberated Nancy of her life~and no I'm not that old~ I had a bad babysitter who thought it was more than appropriate to drag a nine year old to the Village to CB's and the Cat Club as often as possible~ she called it cultural diversity ~ lol~ I did love my Kat thought she really knew how to give a kid freshly transplanted from communist eastern europe to America serious culture shock~ ;)~

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Now there's the Sultry Selene I know so well. Dripping me down the pages of sensual affliiction with the accompaniment of Sid Vicious's guitar. My god his was just as bizarre and erotic as he was talented, especially once his affinity, Nancy came into the picture. Such a strange and yet common love they had.

I'm getting off the subject. Beautiful work, Selene, as always.

[{K}]

I am loving this person's thinking! You are amazing, Selene!

[Fran Marie]

A very uniuqe take on sid and nancy.... one of a kind pair ...your writing never disappoints~ nice job on this

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sid was the ultimate rock and rolla..you just don't get them like him anymore..

[FireWoman]

I was always intrigued by Sid, a talented & tortured soul. Men like these attract my senses like a magnet... must be the combination of danger and my need to care for broken things. I can only imagine what it was like to be welcomed the the United States with such a bang. Ironically, I think experiences like these kept you grounded a bit, never losing site of who YOU are and what YOuUwant. Thank you for sharing another facet, love.

[Sean M. Addams]

awesome piece and very powerful read...imagery was great in this ..very visual.. overall a very superb piece... great job!!

[alan peter kelly]

i heard a story once about young Sid running up to Abba at Heathrow airport and asking for their autographs...i loved his version of Eddie Cochran's "Something Else" and Sinatra's "My Way"...he was a star on the rise til Nancy introduced him to his addictive predisposition :)...One has to crawl before one can walk...to take the blows to know how it goes...to learn that fear is just another word for thrill...and pain must be embraced sooner than later and while one is about it give a lil "love" in return...hell...spread it around...i don't do too much pain these days...my body wont wear it as readily as once was the case inside my physical Camelot...but i can turn quite easily on a penny if the need arises...that's why i avoid public places where alcohol is served more often than not...once...i was part of the fuel...now i am older and have graduated to the perception of an easy target...the gods do not shine brightly in the aftermath of those with such perceptions ;) This piece ressurected many thoughts / feelings...inspired and conjured something new...thank you Selene

[Morning Star]

Powerful wording and very intense feelings
Deep embedded pain and sensual grief
This poem was definitely writing with very painful quill!

[Ray]

Oo... funny how this would sound good as a rap

[Ima]

A very very powerful write up i must say. But it was handled excellently. so Good job done =)

[Aven]

wow, very powerful poem. it felt very impulsive as I read it, yet every word was weighed in well with the context.