This Composite~

This Composite~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

I have a mind

feed it

I have a heart

leave it

I have a soul

seam it

I have blood

redeem it

 

I have eyes

see me

I have lips

creamy

I have hips

dreamy

I have you

easy

 

I have wrists

bind them

I have pearls

find them

I have bones

grind them

I have thighs

ride them

 

I have words

taste them

I have my throat

lace them

I have love

wasp-waisted

I have bite

baited

 

I have him

undo me

I have her

sweat through me

I have them

to move me

I have me

to cool me

 

I have a beat    

pound with it

I have a kiss

drown in it

I have a need

bound with it

I have a sin

ground in it

 

I have soul

pour through me

I have man

undo me

I have sea  

to sooth me

I have earth

redo me

 

 

 

 

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© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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wow. breathtaking and erotic, dreamy, sensuous landscapes, and the words are
the trees blowing in the whispers you render with such beautiul sense of
poetic wisdom, this poem floats through the heart the way a cool breeze
soothe the skin on a warm summer day Selene, blissful and desirous perfumes


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice. Done on a very simplistic scheme, but more powerful for it. My one small gripe (and this may be my only gripe from all your pieces I've read is the I have a throat lace THEM line. It seemed forced to fit the pattern (unless I'm missing an allusion) Still Great poem either way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is beautiful..
I loved it!.
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Selene, you did a really great job writeing this this poem. But i think that you should write more.

Keep it up! you are doing good!

Jessie.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like :) Beautifuly written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is that all you have? Well I guess it will have to do...
Superb write Selene ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just love this it speaks the truth in everyday life you did an awesome job on it! It's so beautiful and descriptive!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smiling ~ hard

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pitter-patter, pitter-patter

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ray
True that...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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