This Composite~

I have a mind

feed it

I have a heart

leave it

I have a soul

seam it

I have blood

redeem it

 

I have eyes

see me

I have lips

creamy

I have hips

dreamy

I have you

easy

 

I have wrists

bind them

I have pearls

find them

I have bones

grind them

I have thighs

ride them

 

I have words

taste them

I have my throat

lace them

I have love

wasp-waisted

I have bite

baited

 

I have him

undo me

I have her

sweat through me

I have them

to move me

I have me

to cool me

 

I have a beat    

pound with it

I have a kiss

drown in it

I have a need

bound with it

I have a sin

ground in it

 

I have soul

pour through me

I have man

undo me

I have sea  

to sooth me

I have earth

redo me

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

wow. breathtaking and erotic, dreamy, sensuous landscapes, and the words are
the trees blowing in the whispers you render with such beautiul sense of
poetic wisdom, this poem floats through the heart the way a cool breeze
soothe the skin on a warm summer day Selene, blissful and desirous perfumes

[Travis Lawrence]

This reminds me of a poem by Gwendolyn Brooks called We Real Cool, the overt repetition of the subject, the quick lines, the simple rhymes, but more than anything else the soul! Thanks for sharing

[Janice Ann]

Everything flowed. I like the fifth stanza...I can see myself saying this. Wonderful piece, once again. You never fail to amaze me...

Janice Ann

[Crowley]

Definitely a different rhythum and staccato stule to this, exactly what I envision when someone paints a portrait using words instead of paint. Detail to die for, description with allusions that make it feel naughty. Great work.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Selene...
You do realize that you have everything don't you? :P..

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Selene,

How are you my dear? May I say yet another gem by a very talented and very teasing mistress. You do know how to get a man's attention. You are like the striptease that is neverending. Quite lovely.

Regards,

Matthew

[Brad]

man, you are bossy!!

"I have you
easy"

getting a little cocky aren't we?
i haven't gotten to read this book yet, i got side tracked with the Hunger Games...these are your words, but the style is different than i'm used to. i love that you are so...um...versatile...flexible...yeah

[lavina k.]

Very beautiful and amazing piece of your work. Each line is as beautiful as you have thought in your mind while writing.
Its truly Breath taking.
Thanks for sharing.

[Charles]

Your sin is Vanity and my sin is Envy, lol.

Nice read.

[alan peter kelly]

you had me from the very first few seconds of my very first encounter...alluring...provocative...sexy as all get out...your way...is a mystic for which to die...

[kuru]

nice rhythm and flow its like a song