This Composite~
A Poem by
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
I have a mind
feed it
I have a heart
leave it
I have a soul
seam it
I have blood
redeem it
I have eyes
see me
I have lips
creamy
I have hips
dreamy
I have you
easy
I have wrists
bind them
I have pearls
find them
I have bones
grind them
I have thighs
ride them
I have words
taste them
I have my throat
lace them
I have love
wasp-waisted
I have bite
baited
I have him
undo me
I have her
sweat through me
I have them
to move me
I have me
to cool me
I have a beat
pound with it
I have a kiss
drown in it
I have a need
bound with it
I have a sin
ground in it
I have soul
pour through me
I have man
undo me
I have sea
to sooth me
I have earth
redo me
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© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
Featured Review
wow. breathtaking and erotic, dreamy, sensuous landscapes, and the words are
the trees blowing in the whispers you render with such beautiul sense of
poetic wisdom, this poem floats through the heart the way a cool breeze
soothe the skin on a warm summer day Selene, blissful and desirous perfumes
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Complete restruction1
Full circle
Bended
Broken
AWESOME! LOL
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Complete restruction1
Full circle
Bended
Broken
AWESOME! LOL
xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great poem, it flows very nicely! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great poem, it flows very nicely! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Cleverly composed... I liked the short pithy lines and the repetition, like a spell, enchanting the reader with its blend of soul and body given in love and delight... and the sense of connexion with the primal elements of life...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Cleverly composed... I liked the short pithy lines and the repetition, like a spell, enchanting the reader with its blend of soul and body given in love and delight... and the sense of connexion with the primal elements of life...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sexed-up Buddhic deconstruction.
Well, "I" is a koan, but when the strip tease runs out of composite veils, there remains Infinity.
"I have a beat/pound with it/I have a kiss/drown in it/I have a need/bound with it/I have a sin/ground in it"
That stanza emphasizes the sleek rock lyric nature of this smokin' piece. Let me know if you want a song version of this. I'm all over it w/slashing guitar and growling vocals. . .
Thrill-killer siren Zen song.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Sexed-up Buddhic deconstruction.
Well, "I" is a koan, but when the strip tease runs out of composite veils, there remains Infinity.
"I have a beat/pound with it/I have a kiss/drown in it/I have a need/bound with it/I have a sin/ground in it"
That stanza emphasizes the sleek rock lyric nature of this smokin' piece. Let me know if you want a song version of this. I'm all over it w/slashing guitar and growling vocals. . .
Thrill-killer siren Zen song.
2 of 3 people found this review constructive.
This is just soo wonderful! It makes you smile as you read it all the way! :) Thanx for the read request! The lines in this poem are written so nicely and flowlingly! Very great!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is just soo wonderful! It makes you smile as you read it all the way! :) Thanx for the read request! The lines in this poem are written so nicely and flowlingly! Very great!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very nice. great job
Posted 14 Years Ago
very nice. great job
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great poem. Flows very nicely.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great poem. Flows very nicely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow what a beautiful poem! A great write and a wonderful read! I love it! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow what a beautiful poem! A great write and a wonderful read! I love it! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow; this was sexy
a confident woman
that knows what she has
and knows what she wants
so smooth
so talented
Posted 14 Years Ago
wow; this was sexy
a confident woman
that knows what she has
and knows what she wants
so smooth
so talented
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a beautiful picture you write....:)
Peace
Robin
Posted 14 Years Ago
What a beautiful picture you write....:)
Peace
Robin
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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