This Composite~

I have a mind

feed it

I have a heart

leave it

I have a soul

seam it

I have blood

redeem it

 

I have eyes

see me

I have lips

creamy

I have hips

dreamy

I have you

easy

 

I have wrists

bind them

I have pearls

find them

I have bones

grind them

I have thighs

ride them

 

I have words

taste them

I have my throat

lace them

I have love

wasp-waisted

I have bite

baited

 

I have him

undo me

I have her

sweat through me

I have them

to move me

I have me

to cool me

 

I have a beat    

pound with it

I have a kiss

drown in it

I have a need

bound with it

I have a sin

ground in it

 

I have soul

pour through me

I have man

undo me

I have sea  

to sooth me

I have earth

redo me

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

wow. breathtaking and erotic, dreamy, sensuous landscapes, and the words are
the trees blowing in the whispers you render with such beautiul sense of
poetic wisdom, this poem floats through the heart the way a cool breeze
soothe the skin on a warm summer day Selene, blissful and desirous perfumes

[Bard Constantine]

Deceptively simple... yet so complex. This composite... the indiviual bricks that make up the whole of who we are... some may be cracked, others near shattered, but the ones that are whole, strong, enduring... are more than enough to hold us together. Gorgeous writing, and always thought-provoking...

[TaiPie]

This poem flows excellently! I believe this is one of the best on this website :) Its simple, but it gives it depth and meaning.

[Robyn]

very interesting
i like the flow of this

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I agree with David Moore. The very same line jumped out at me as well for the very same reason. Other than this, the poem's simplicity definitely gives strength to the piece. I love the ending as well, "I have earth/redo me." Excellent!

Linda Marie

[Talkativeted]

A great poem. Well constructed.

[DannyLynne Riley]

once again Ms. Selene you raise the bar and I am always the richer after visiting your treasury of words and life lessons that u paint so beautifuly into poetic form...I always enjoy spending time in your world -DannyLynne

[KatiePie]

Every line was packed with power, and yet it still has an easy going type of flow to it with a hint of seduction, I loved it. The entire piece is gorgeous, great write. Thank you for sharing.

[Art Sun]

The characteristic view of oneself can reveal more than one even knows of thyself...

nice...

[Hellslastwarrior]

Hey selene - really enjoyed this poem - made me laugh a couple of times haha . Good verses and funny one liners :P Good content of poetry liked it.
Ted

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Lovely, fabulous beat.