Girl Finds her Apple Core~

~A Haiga Is A Haiku Painted Image~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~there is no end to creative poetic play with a haiga which is like cotton candy to the poet soul with a preference for sweets~ ;)~

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Selene,

I must say I have come upon a couple forms of Poetry I am not very familiar with, course I am not the brightest star in the sky. Speaking of Stars, you know what irritates me? No I know you don't know...sorry..but I moved out of the city so I can see stars in the sky, and yet I cannot see a one. It's the little things that make beauty and it seems the little things are always first to go.....hmmmm

Anyway Sorry, I went on a rant. Not being familiar with this I feel I am not really qualified to judge this, but I have read a few of your writings before and they never disappoint. So I read this a couple of times. I like it. I like the simpleness behind it yet it tells a huge tale. If you just open up your imagination. Fascinating really. Much enjoyed and as always well done

Always,

Matthew

[luciddreamer]

absolutely beautful...I like learning new things

[An owl on the moon]

There is a subtle playfulness in your form and flow. Beautifully etched.. you create a world of dreamish delight in tastes and vision... and tell a story so profound.

accepted to the male and female craving. who doesn't love a little sweetness in life? :>

[Larry Dyson]

taste
eve
apple
thrill

adam
rib
sweet
in
fire

baby
back
commecial
tomatoe

sauce

[Pax Analog]

Yummy change-up this haiga form -- and an o so yummy image on this one!

Even distilled to haiku pith, your magic wand conjures a delightful dessert for the soul.

Bone-rib-cream-bloom-apple. Feast of meaning in an aeonic blink of the eye.

[Ed Hart]

speaking of good eats...
kinds of preferential sweets...
eve apple treats!

[dovetailer]

Eve's biting desire
for enlightenment began
the need for fashion

[dovetailer]

Don't forget where the bone came from...WOMAN! lol

an apple a day gets the serpent's OK...

[My Fair Lady]

Simply splendid... as usual.

[Kimber L]

I love this one Selene. The spin you put on it is fantastic. I am in a great mood today and full of hope myself. Your poem was the perfect read for where I am at right now. :)