Kahlua On The Slide~

~club hoppin with gods~ ;)~

Slide me in between

your jugular and mind

roll me through the club

in a crystal glass of ice

pour me down the throat

of every skin ablaze

rub me raw against the night

and feed me to the maze

where the minotaur lays tethered

with a grin and cherry blossoms

woven through a braid

of Rapunzel's Apple Bottoms

straining flesh against the denim

as she throws all caution far

and reflects her golden eyes into a disco ball

suspended from the thigh of a stripper on a wire

scaling every man and woman as they glaze their bodies higher

and my merriment is rich

as my teeth sharpen on your bones

etched against a man

bent into the pole

who lifts a crystal goblet

out of a world crushed deep in clay

and pours me like Kahlua

into his cream puree

and I wallow

and I grind

and I kick and buck with zest

as they serve me on the side

with a woman who's confessed

her every sin into my throat

with a mouth that tastes like dreams

and a tongue winds around the stem

of a god fallen and amazed

by all these human antics

and all these animal decrees

and I offer him a glass of me

made from a willow tree

"Do you like it godling?" we throng and smile and dance

against his hair like silver

against his golden abs

as we lick him clean of heaven

and spill our earth and mud

all around his fragments

and he laughs and easily succumbs

to all these manmade sins

and all these manmade glories

he drinks Kahlua with some cream

I smile

the end

of story

 

 

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Reviews

[Jibey]

As always in your writing, the firework of images creates a bright and pulsing poem, with the interlacing (not quite right for fireworks, I admit) of sensual hints - the straining flesh, the suspended thighs, the cream, the grinding and so on... a sort of luscious melange of myth and sex... with strobe lighting and smoke effects...

[Wildfleour]

Always awesome no matter how many times I read it.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

An awesome write.

[deeps]

Whoa! This is captivating and wonderful. I enjoyed this well written write.

[Michael X]

wow, selene, exotic and temptuous mix of music, smoke and mirrors creates the magic this poem envelops, the imagery is celestial, a supurb undertaking of art and the muses that define inspiration with such a sensuous feeling of erotica-hynotics, i love the effect your words have, and the lacy way you weave such

intriquate notions, as this was a party high reaching the sun, i love how you create such an atmoshere with starburst images like glittering lights caught in a strobe or a mix of dreams and dancing, such a brilliant poem. keep it up

[KatiePie]

The imagery.. The flow.. every word. Amazing write.

[Dark Lady Phoenix]

Really liked this...good read!

[Morning Star]

WOW and WOW your words left me speechless Selene
The imagery and rhythms and rhyme was magnificent
I know you wrote this brilliant piece wit your sensual quill
Kudos!

[DamienHino]

Awesome! Love this piece it's literature that can be anaylzed and broken down because it's just to deep with substance

[emmajoy]

You take the art of writing onto another plane and your readers are whirled around into visual frantic frenzy ..

.. where does it all come from and, can it be bought?!

This is such an exciting piece, sensual, third stage mystic .. ' as she throws all caution far ~ and reflects her golden eyes into a disco ball ~ suspended from the thigh of a stripper on a wire ~ scaling every man and woman as they glaze their bodies higher '

Vivid brilliance!

[Robin]

"we throng and smile and dance" within your words , fantastic writing