HoneyBee~A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
A silver lake golden minnows girl made of honey in a lace sugar dress boy made of smoke dark licorice stained lips weeping willows heavy with sunshine protesting their nature hanging branches curved into smiles "A pocket full of sunshine." laughs the girl opens her palm on a monarch butterfly boy widens the caves of his eyes hungry to be in girl's palm to be inside girl's pores girl knows smiles parts cherry blossom lips invitation on allure a lure he leans into the sweet perfume of her story she strokes corners of his dreams pollen rich on her tongue giving him good pollination the butterfly flexes a wing her proboscis deep in the girl's honey pores boy slips deep into girl's blossom kiss her buttercup tongue spreads himself like sweet berry jam across her peach soul; the Monarch gives girl side eye "Honeybee," says the butterfly, "Ain't you gorged yet, honeybee?" girl winks one long eye of emerald facets lifts the butterfly between her brows where in ink she spreads orange black and yellow hues while the girl cups a pocket full of sunshine drinks a cup of sky her wings paper thin but for now still strong enough to hold a world she strokes her middle hive swaying to the sound of a river a thousand honey bees weaving little chambers in her belly
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~primal baklavah~ if it tastes like honey and feels like honey and goes down like honey . . . . well. . . . =)~
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It must be honey...? I think you're right... This was pretty sweet, to say the least... I always feel like I'm reading faerie tales...perhaps I am? I think we will collect you, and share you with my future children, because I think I should want them to know the same magic I've had the pleasure of knowing reading your work, Ms. Selene... Another beautifully written and soul capturing write. You can do no wrong.
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All was beauty - the choice of words, the images, the flow of the rhythms as all those s's slid along and caressed my mind like the girl's cherry lips and her buttercup tongue... Just wonderful.
Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
~primal baklavah~apt...pure selenesong, covering the colors of notes on scales of ribbons that distantly windwave allures of scent, taste, touch, and mind depths where swim swirling symbols so close to the primal bakalavah...ahhh
Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
What a beautiful poem. This girl.........and boy, reads like a fairytale of beginnings, his desire and her beauty all wrapped on a summers day.......full of colour, smells and senses are assaulted with your words. I read and read your words, and see story in story, the girl being the honeybee, at one with her own body........you write so so beautifully.
Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
It must be honey...? I think you're right... This was pretty sweet, to say the least... I always feel like I'm reading faerie tales...perhaps I am? I think we will collect you, and share you with my future children, because I think I should want them to know the same magic I've had the pleasure of knowing reading your work, Ms. Selene... Another beautifully written and soul capturing write. You can do no wrong.
Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
I hear the music within this loud and clear, its sweet, sweet honey to my ears
I love your rhythm ~ Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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25 Reviews
Last Updated on September 17, 2010
Tags: primal baklavah, poetry, pagan trinity, sensual innocence, dichotomy in electric action, days of honey, swingin through the trees, surreal stalks, victoriaselene skye deme, books
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NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
AsIf, Trippy Cottontail, Japan
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