The Kind Of Girl That Melts In Your Mind~

I'm the kind of girl

whose chocolate layers blend

through a man who gives good mind

and can take me straight or bent

a man who would be subtle through my mornings by the sea

and unfold me from my robes over some jasmine tea

with lemon glaze dipped honey

dripped against my hips

his kiss spread with the world

against my hungry lips

dying just to drown against a man who knows his soul

who knows just how to feed me without ever being told

to touch my cortex sharp

press his mind against my need

as I gently stroll his body

and drink his intellect like mead

stirred with captivating prisms and cultivated shine

I love my men inside of me

with swollen drips of mind

because I'm the kind of girl

that  melts into a man

who can feel me past the shell

and melt me in his hands

who gets me like a blade gets dipped in sallow blood

who can get me high off both intellect and love

because I'm the kind of girl who loves to slip between your thighs

but whose needs are never simple or easily defined

and though I'll take you deep

through my body on a sound

that purrrs against your throat

and digs it sleek or bound

what makes me melt against the bones

is a man who can astound

groove me on an exposition

of thoughtful candy rounds

and I will be your filling drenched in chocolate highs

burst sweet across your tongue if you give me deep, good mind

 

 

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Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

If I had a nickel for every beautiful girl (on the outside) I've known, that did absolutely nothing for me, I'd be Rich. The intellect is the biggest erogenous zone there is. Give me the bookworm in the nerdy glasses, that is kind, compassionate, confident, and mysterious, and she already looks more sexy then the girl with the smoking body, and a pea for a brain.

I need more. I need my mind stimulated, as well. You can only look at a pretty face for so long... and then what... is there anyone in there, is anyone home?

Now if you have the body, and the brains, well then... that is just the icing on the cake.

Selene, dearheart, you have one of the sexiest brains I know :)

Smart, and sweet. Loved this poetess!!!
Antonio xx

[Maurice]

Very sensuous. Again, your inimitable style is sheer beauty.

[Ed Hart]

i know what's fair, and what's not; and this is definitely not fair...there's no sense taking three paragraphs spelling it out, it's not fair, and you know it; in fact, you knew it when that first line came out of the apple box...i've seen you in a thousand guises, but never with this smile in your heart, my lady

[Seashell]

This is a wonderful descriptive piece going down the comparison route.
"Deep, good mind" does it for me every time also. It makes me melt in to a cup waiting to be poured !! Nothing to beat tall dark and handsome tho...good thing my hubby is just that but with a good deep mind also....Ohhhh I am such a spoilt girl.
Thanks for tasty piece...you have me salivating.

Babs xxx

[Brad]

:0
ahem...well, uh...i'm trying not to let the testosterone levels in my body control the outcome of this review...err....um....
ok..i say this with everything...if it moves me or invokes some sort of reaction be good or bad...i shelve it into my favorites...this one moved me...obviously i'm a guy, but you know how to do erotica in a classy way with taste (in this case: chocolate)...i could not close my eyes on this one because i'm at work, and i know how my mind works. a hot write, spinny, you certainly know how to sing a song, that's fo sho..

[Dream Weaver]

I do love chocolate...and I'm inhaling
it from this beautiful write..as always
a sensational piece Selene...

[Abdul Aziz]

This is explosive with sweetness. You choose your words very very carefully, though it all comes together to feel as if you wrote it just as it came to your mind. I like how the poem gets increasingly rhythmic as it progresses. There are a lot of lines I'd like to quote. But for sheer genius, I'd love to say that the conclusion is the best part of the poem:

"what makes me melt against the bones
is a man who can astound
groove me on an exposition
of thoughtful candy rounds
and I will be your filling drenched in chocolate highs
burst sweet across your tongue if you give me deep, good mind"
Simply awesome!