The Kind Of Girl That Melts In Your Mind~

I'm the kind of girl

whose chocolate layers blend

through a man who gives good mind

and can take me straight or bent

a man who would be subtle through my mornings by the sea

and unfold me from my robes over some jasmine tea

with lemon glaze dipped honey

dripped against my hips

his kiss spread with the world

against my hungry lips

dying just to drown against a man who knows his soul

who knows just how to feed me without ever being told

to touch my cortex sharp

press his mind against my need

as I gently stroll his body

and drink his intellect like mead

stirred with captivating prisms and cultivated shine

I love my men inside of me

with swollen drips of mind

because I'm the kind of girl

that  melts into a man

who can feel me past the shell

and melt me in his hands

who gets me like a blade gets dipped in sallow blood

who can get me high off both intellect and love

because I'm the kind of girl who loves to slip between your thighs

but whose needs are never simple or easily defined

and though I'll take you deep

through my body on a sound

that purrrs against your throat

and digs it sleek or bound

what makes me melt against the bones

is a man who can astound

groove me on an exposition

of thoughtful candy rounds

and I will be your filling drenched in chocolate highs

burst sweet across your tongue if you give me deep, good mind

 

 

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Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

If I had a nickel for every beautiful girl (on the outside) I've known, that did absolutely nothing for me, I'd be Rich. The intellect is the biggest erogenous zone there is. Give me the bookworm in the nerdy glasses, that is kind, compassionate, confident, and mysterious, and she already looks more sexy then the girl with the smoking body, and a pea for a brain.

I need more. I need my mind stimulated, as well. You can only look at a pretty face for so long... and then what... is there anyone in there, is anyone home?

Now if you have the body, and the brains, well then... that is just the icing on the cake.

Selene, dearheart, you have one of the sexiest brains I know :)

Smart, and sweet. Loved this poetess!!!
Antonio xx

[Ruth]

OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!! lol
The kind of girl to fuel the fire for an eternity! The kind of girl who breathes life into the depths of gloom! lol
Selene, have to say, this is one of my fav's of your's love lol
100/100 lol
xx

[Andrew Wright]

I have to seriously agree with Antonio on this one. The mind is so much more appealing. And reading the work on this site sometimes, is so stimulating, to say the least. And oh, how your work stimulates me...

[Nancy S.]

This is pure honey in contemplation of the bees, which is to say the heart in awe of the mind...

every time I read this poetic filled with romantic thought and the often misunderstood and overlooked needs of the intellect... I wish for a Y chromosome... for so deep your narrator touches me...

beautiful webbings

[heich]

beautiful..

[RTB]

cant be strait or bent not my mind haha good write good job!! :)

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and lovely.

[Willow B. Coldfeather]

This is so beautiful.
I love the repetition, and the descriptiveness.
Hell, I love everything about it!
Awesome imagery (and taste for that matter :D )

[Fran Marie]

A most delicious piece of poetry~gotta luv those chocolate highs~ indeed;

very nicely penned

[Steve]

Mmmm
Yummy Stuff here! I like this one.....I read it over several times! Very, very delicious! I like your writing.....

[Bubo]

So so spot on, what is sex if not of a coming together of the mind, the intelligence, wit.........I love the play on words, and the true understanding of what a true relationship is, sex lasts so long, and then the rest lies inside the mind and the glorious expectations. Beautiful warm words.