Oh how you inspire. Selene, you humble my abilitites to the core, and I thank you for that. Just reading your work challenges one, to try and create something really special. What a gift that is that you give us. You are in your own leauge. We are all just fortunate enough to have someone like you amongst us.
The use of the violin is breath taking :) A beautifully crafted poem hon, a bite to the senses! A really poignant poem that leaves the reader swirling in the hues of the chords played here!
AWESOME!
Love your style hon!
xx
Oh this is very vividly venomous! What an astounding poem .. such beautiful images ... so sexy and sensual without use of anatomy , even a kiss.. but very erotic.
A swing , a cradle, incense a girl a guy.. someone may die!
This is very good, Selene.. A pleasure for the senses.
I don't like doing this but have to repeat these lines so vivid and lovely:
she swallows mulberry shadows from the trees
raspberry hollows from the ground
“You are everything, and more.” he says “Everything that astounds.”
her laughter dark smoke
a clearing for repose
slide
unwind
her appetite
he comes undone
so this
is
love
her soul stained glove
between his dreams groping
stoking
his death with her life
the arch of his spine
between her teeth a silver knife
lethal berry
the man now wary
stallion turns
his hooves whisper
waiting
at his back a man placating
a forever woman always so mistaken
by a world without an eye
jeweled between the lotus of the mind
and the palm of open box, snuggled Pandora womb
her sway down through his soul
opens up the bole
divides him from his skin
Severely lovely and lethal.. le petite morte..
You can wrap words so well ... making such gift in a beautiful box.
Oh my Selene, where to begin with this wickedly wonderful adventure of sensuality. I am assuming that ending was as I thought which of course is one of my favorite to read and write. I love your tact of words and how you hint at it, say it then change strides to only come back to it. :) Ok this is awesome enough said
Such a storied depiction of seemingly
perpetual and sensual intrique. Hand
crafted to perfection IMO...Top shelf
if not beyond! Nicely done Selene as
always.
"so this
is
love
her soul stained glove
between his dreams groping
stoking
his death with her life"
God-i can quote this whole poem!
Really---just superb--every line is perfect!!!
i can just feel this piece!!!
"her fingertips on the strings of a violin
playing"
---very intense indeed!!!
i love it:-)