Pandora'sViolin~
A Poem by
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
Her soul started swaying to the hurt in the quake of violin strings a swing made of gold braided rope a scroll unwinding its supple leather of hope madmen on knees rocking a burning cradle aromatic spirit steaming a gold plated ladle tipped softly sipped drips in cinnamon caress a trail down her throat between moon breasts to kiss an origami note folded dove pearl his teeth strike for the girl but girl is cobra scaled in lightning arch a tattooed arm a sharp hand with sharper fingertips clench his primal howl slip of vermillion cowl revelation his anticipation drawn across her lips in his syrup her boots in a stirrup stallion quivering between her thighs “Is this goodbye?” he works the binding her laughter a storm, blinding with crescendo bejeweled with innuendo inescapable grasp of her hand around his wrist “I will not be another point that you will miss.” she pulls him up with ease “Please . . . “ his wince “Oh come now, prince.” she winks she struts her animal in primal back against his hips in a saddle his quivering arrow in a bow “Why so quaky now when we’ve sealed the down below.” the horse expands his flanks between her thighs she pulls his press of metal deep into her side the man pressed into her spine his arms impress her waist a pop of reality displaced she swallows mulberry shadows from the trees raspberry hollows from the ground “You are everything, and more.” he says “Everything that astounds.” her laughter dark smoke a clearing for repose slide unwind her appetite he comes undone so this is love her soul stained glove between his dreams groping stoking his death with her life the arch of his spine between her teeth a silver knife lethal berry the man now wary stallion turns his hooves whisper waiting at his back a man placating a forever woman always so mistaken by a world without an eye jeweled between the lotus of the mind and the palm of open box, snuggled Pandora womb her sway down through his soul opens up the bole divides him from his skin she slips sips him down with gin her soul swaying her fingertips on the strings of a violin playingcopyright:vssmd/pa.inc ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
from the upcoming
The Surreal Stalks And Times Of A GutterGirl~
release date Autumn 2010
© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
Author's Note
~artsy venom~ ;)~
Featured Review
Oh how you inspire. Selene, you humble my abilitites to the core, and I thank you for that. Just reading your work challenges one, to try and create something really special. What a gift that is that you give us. You are in your own leauge. We are all just fortunate enough to have someone like you amongst us.
In love with your words.
Antonio xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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“You are everything, and more.” And the reason for that is just below the bottom edge of reason where it's dangerous to swim
Posted 14 Years Ago
“You are everything, and more.” And the reason for that is just below the bottom edge of reason where it's dangerous to swim
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Interesting.Sunflower
Posted 14 Years Ago
Interesting.Sunflower
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh how you inspire. Selene, you humble my abilitites to the core, and I thank you for that. Just reading your work challenges one, to try and create something really special. What a gift that is that you give us. You are in your own leauge. We are all just fortunate enough to have someone like you amongst us.
In love with your words.
Antonio xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Oh how you inspire. Selene, you humble my abilitites to the core, and I thank you for that. Just reading your work challenges one, to try and create something really special. What a gift that is that you give us. You are in your own leauge. We are all just fortunate enough to have someone like you amongst us.
In love with your words.
Antonio xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
LOOOOOOOOOVED this poem it was funny it made me laugh quiet hard and loud at one point because i was in antisipation for reading the next line and the next line just so happens to be "His Antisipation!" good stuff loved it want to see more.
Posted 14 Years Ago
LOOOOOOOOOVED this poem it was funny it made me laugh quiet hard and loud at one point because i was in antisipation for reading the next line and the next line just so happens to be "His Antisipation!" good stuff loved it want to see more.
I can hear that Violin ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
I can hear that Violin ...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very sensuous writing that captivates. Beautiful as always.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very sensuous writing that captivates. Beautiful as always.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I am in love with the very first line,Her soul started swaying to the hurt in the quake of violin..
lovely...
Your poem not only speaks out as a whole,but also as individual words..it is as if you breath your charm and wit into every word,every phrase you choose.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I am in love with the very first line,Her soul started swaying to the hurt in the quake of violin..
lovely...
Your poem not only speaks out as a whole,but also as individual words..it is as if you breath your charm and wit into every word,every phrase you choose.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Selene, the opening 'violin tunes' immersed my soul in wondrous visuals of a love/hate relationship giving it life which breathes and bleeds alternately, as only YOU can do.
“I will not be another point that you will miss.”.....YOU never miss
Posted 14 Years Ago
Selene, the opening 'violin tunes' immersed my soul in wondrous visuals of a love/hate relationship giving it life which breathes and bleeds alternately, as only YOU can do.
“I will not be another point that you will miss.”.....YOU never miss
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Umm... Forgive me... I'm not certain, but is this...lust? That's what I took from it. Eve if it isn't, that's what I read. Okay, while I only liked the last one I read, this one...wow...wow...world of warcraft whilst in purple clouds sippin' guiness stout WOW. Have you ever thought about putting your work to music (forgive me if you have already). I think you'd put today's hip hop artists to shame. Very, very beautiful piece here, Ms. Selene. I have very few favorites of anything in this world, but this piece right here is definitely one of them.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Umm... Forgive me... I'm not certain, but is this...lust? That's what I took from it. Eve if it isn't, that's what I read. Okay, while I only liked the last one I read, this one...wow...wow...world of warcraft whilst in purple clouds sippin' guiness stout WOW. Have you ever thought about putting your work to music (forgive me if you have already). I think you'd put today's hip hop artists to shame. Very, very beautiful piece here, Ms. Selene. I have very few favorites of anything in this world, but this piece right here is definitely one of them.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I loved that you used shape to reiterate the message in this sensual amazing poem of spite, lust and intrigue! Beautiful, abstract but gutsy write :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I loved that you used shape to reiterate the message in this sensual amazing poem of spite, lust and intrigue! Beautiful, abstract but gutsy write :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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