PaperCut~

PaperCut~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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Her face

there is a story in her face

Eden plumps her berry lips

connects to the dimpled diamond at the tip of her chin

a fractal silver ring in a flared nostril

inhaling blossoms slipping through a portal

drawn in an origami cube

hovering somewhere between completion

and immortal rhymes

 

Her skin is white with capillary trails

drawn in blue smoke

a blur of shifting screens playing colors

in frames of white gauze

her lids

lined with sandalwood

hickory in her pores

uneven blush lights

like rope trails at the jaw line

 

A slide of peel skin

like a  ribbon of blood rind

curls back from the bone frame of a cheek

carefully

to the sound of music

opaque in its pitch

sharp in a note

like a razor

against the shutters of a camera

the smile lost somewhere between a depression

a click

 

Her face

there is a story in her face

cross stitched

with paper cuts

invisible to the spectrums

trimmed back in layers

to complement the folds

of the origami

in pink

between the fingers of the stone yakuza;

blue is the color of the mood

blood is the fable

and the cost

 

copyright:2010vssmd/amusemusepress

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© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~looking at reflections through an upside down glass that spills nothing but inhales every movement~every thought~ ;)~

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Silk and silent etchings of beauty and depth in painful reality and surreal consciousness, with a symphony of words tuned to perfection as only your mind to hand can do. One of your very best, dear Poet~

Message to Heich~ Selene has several books published, and I'm sure she'll direct you towards to her website so you can view the titles for future reading. I've read them all, and I will tell you honestly that she is the very best poet you will ever read. I have my review of her first book on my website, here's the link in case you would like to read it: http://theartisansandbox.xitti.com/groups/11

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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to me, your poetry is an experience, and defies the easy explanation of review...no this-and-thatness here; but a pull as powerful as Edan, and as sweet and dangerous as a proffered apple, don't you know...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very interesting and abstract as with most of your writing.
I must admit i find it difficult to undersatand, but that is more of a reflection on me rather than you.
I think i am much better at writing than analysing. But, i try!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Like everything you write it is just amazing. Blows my mind how you do it.
It does flow beautifuly.
This is so great

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was tantalizingly descriptive. I was drawn in and could feel the words flow off my lips with ease.
I loved how you infused the poem with a flare of Japanese culture; the origami and Yakuza, that was a brilliant level of interest you added there. Fine work.
God bless!


Posted 14 Years Ago


Silk and silent etchings of beauty and depth in painful reality and surreal consciousness, with a symphony of words tuned to perfection as only your mind to hand can do. One of your very best, dear Poet~

Message to Heich~ Selene has several books published, and I'm sure she'll direct you towards to her website so you can view the titles for future reading. I've read them all, and I will tell you honestly that she is the very best poet you will ever read. I have my review of her first book on my website, here's the link in case you would like to read it: http://theartisansandbox.xitti.com/groups/11

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

though blood related things give me a cringe most of the time, what you've written here is very artistic... and your source of inspiration for the poem is something i'm going to think about for quite some time :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This reminds me of a song- "Bloody mary" the name of the band is Azra... Great poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"blood is the fable and the cost" -- really good line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are really one of a kind...are you a writer in profession?have you published a book..im definitely a fan..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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