Idyll in the mizzle!

Just written what i have experienced this morning. (Written on 3rd Oct 2012, at Visakhapatnam.)

As i found my way out of gym, this morning,

i put my coat on, and moved on pacing;

not lately when i found, that it was raining,

i felt like lord gave me something, which i was claiming.

Stepping onto the drenched land, as i kept walking,

i see some women, with their kids - school going;

looking happy indeed, for seeing their kids growing,

as they caught their bus, boarding it hopping.

Not far from there, stood few beautiful girls,

clad in gorgeous attires, and taking whirls;

partly covering their faces, with a shared umbrella,

as if showing me, the attitude of a cinderella.

Walking down the road, i could see the park beside,

usually filled by joggers, who are moved by rain aside;

the only thing i miss is, the touch of the sacred feminine,

that one girl, who usually drives me to cloud nine.

Fine greenery, dense fog, cool breeze...oh what a nature,

i couldn't resist but, fold my hands and thank the creator;

'what a nice gift in esteem', are my words of the theme,

when i finally have seen, the idol of the supreme.

Reviews

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Good job !!!

[Saahitya Vedula]

I guess ur first love is he RAIN.....

so write as many love letters in its way!!!

[Chandra Sekhar Vedula]

Haha :)