Memories

Memories

a very bad thing 

i wish they'd disappear

millions are roaming in my head

i see each of them very clear

sad ones and happy ones

and i cry in fear

that i'll never live them again

one day i'll forget how it feels

Memories

a very dangerous thing

be careful what they bring

some times they break your heart

sometimes they really sting

and they let you live in fear

that you'll never live them again

one day you'll forget how it feels

Memories

a very pure thing

they help you sleep at night

they help you build hope

to hold to life really tight

and you love them and you adore them

you wish they won't ever disappear

they are the only thing that reminds you

that you belong somewhere indeed

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Powerful, profound, and solemn. Every stanza really packs a good punch and a decent progression of thoughts. Certain lines are weak in the musicality (they're not flowing as fluidly as they should despite the power of the lines/message), but on the whole this is fantastic. Well done!

[Cara]

thank you XD
glad you liked it ^.^

[apennylate]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

Pulsating, heavy eyes without sleep... The end wraps up with a touch of purity and relief... I think we all have that special memory, or perhaps memories... It either haunts us endlessly, or gets us through the darkest storm... Well penned... Very thoughtful....

[Cara]

first of all thank you for sending me an invite, and i'm very glad to be be one of the members in the group..
and thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, i'm glad you liked it

[apennylate]

Absolutely my pleasure, glad to have you... Thanks again for joining! Be sure to check the group-page for updates!

[DLP]

I like the concept you bring

[Cara]

thank you XD