to the death of my grandpa

I don't know how to react to death

especially when it's someone i know

yes..everyone dies in the end

of this only, i am sure

It's the first time i'm about to choke

and my words refuse to be written

afraid that he'll really be dead

if i ever finish this poem

it's hard to realize and accept

that one of your family is gone

we'll never hear from him again

he'll sit and talk to us no more

its ok, i mean that's how it goes

won't be long till we meet again

but know that i do forgive him,

and till the end of time i'll love him

i guess i won't finish this one 

let it stay a little bit more here

until i understand how to

treat the death of someone dear...

Reviews

[apennylate]

Well put... Also very sadly put... Heart-wrenching, in fact... That line...

*It's the first time i'm about to choke
and my words refuse to be written
afraid that he'll really be dead
if i ever finish this poem*

... Very haunting... I wish you the best... This was a great way to deal with emotions, and it was beautiful...

[Cara]

thank you for your nice words, glad you liked it

[apennylate]

You are most welcome, I certainly did

[Meshalini]

It's very painful to accept the death of someone whom we love so much, but we can't avoid death...
well written...

[Cara]

true, thank you for reading

[Salar Majak]

[Farhan Shaikh]

If you write a poem on someone you love... that person never dies...very good work..

[Cara]

thank you for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

No words can help you. Death of someone you love. Take times to understand. Some deaths teach us. To spend more time with the people we love. I'm sorry for your lost.
Coyote

[Cara]

thank you for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Cara.